July 12th, 2010 at 05:34am
So, I really love this story. :D
I'm rather surprised that it has so few comments, though.
And I just thought I'd let you know that you have chapter 20 posted twice.
I got all excited about another chapter and it was the same one. Dx
Hahaha. But it's all good. (:
I thought the conversation between Brendon and Manda was so natural and everything flowed very well. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.