Ha, just finished! I love I love I love! You've captured the sweet side of Jimmy that fans don't really see so well! Can't wait for more, I like your writing style a lot.
Not your best? That was amazing, hun!! I honestly think that you just described my dream house. I love your descriptions. I can always picture every word you type (yes, even the "the"s and "and"s! lol)
Why the hell are you such a good writer? I mean, honestly. How can you make a fillerish chapter seem all... Cute?
Proof. "Good luck with finding a place," she paused, "you should keep in mind how many people will be showing up. A place near the beach and by hotels would really be ideal, just so no one drives after drinking."
She's so friggen' sweet. I love her. And seeing it now, all official and everything, the name completely fits. So yeah, anyways. I love how you made it seem so perfectly easy. Their relationship. Her relationship with Brian. Everything just flowed perfectly.
I loved the parts where she reminded him to take his sunglasses and Jim told her he'd be home around dinner. It was very couple-y =D
Oh and btw! I was right! About the house, I mean. I can't wait to see her reaction. I can't wait to see where you take this story and I can't wait for the cheesiness =D
I loved it, hun!!! I can't wait to find out what Jimmy's hiding. I love this story and all of its amazing mushiness. It's just what I need to make me smile :)
AHHH this is sooo cute. just what i needed to help save me from this day of work. and what is he hiding? oh i'm so excited to know. i can't wait. you have to update soon!
I loved the story but you already knew that! I think Jimmers bought her a house. Which is why he got that little sparkle in his gorgeous blue eyes when he was talking about the painting =D
I love how you added yourself into the story. Ya know? The whole artistic thing is so you! And then I feel like you included your nice, happy, adorable side into the stoy =) I'm beyond excited to see where this one goes.
I love you for writing a cheesy story! You know how much I've wanted to read one. I'm so glad you got this idea. The beginning is abolsutely excellent. Oh and I love Jimmy's slightly more lovable, serious and toned-down side. I love his happy one too, but this is a refreshing change =)