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  • hachie

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    AWESOME ONESHOT! X3
    I really love how you made Matt and Va together!
    I just can't believe that Brian went back to that chick after she was the on who ended it!!!!! XP
    And to lie in her face even though she knew what was going on.
    She is one tough cookie!
    You defiantly make a sequel one shot about her moving on her with her life and shoving it in Brian's face or better yet make this oneshot a full length story!!!!!!!!! XD
    November 17th, 2010 at 09:16am
  • itbemet

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    That chick had balls of steel. Great job. I loved this!
    September 24th, 2010 at 11:59am
  • TrIkK BaBiI

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    Great one-shot!!
    I loved it!

    <3 Kat
    October 29th, 2009 at 06:46pm
  • Synlvr85

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    Great one shot! Bri..sigh...damn men!
    August 17th, 2009 at 01:02am
  • Flux Capacitor

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    Great job! I really enjoyed reading this....
    I hate cheaters! :grr:

    Amazing Clap
    August 15th, 2009 at 12:12pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    Damn it was sad how Brian hurt her

    I really like how you made him sort of the bad guy

    CHEATER!!!

    LOL

    Great work!!!
    August 15th, 2009 at 08:06am
  • Princess Plague

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    Awwww you didn't have to thank me silly girl, you wrote it all by yourself and WOW am I amazed or what?

    I AM AMAZED :O this was SO damn cool and WOW I already don't like Brian anymore lmao so giving you total ownership on Jimmy just felw out the window lmao....

    I so loved the part with Matt and Val, and yes I can tell you love them. I mean they are the cutest couple in rock history and you just managed to make them EVEN cuter...

    I SO loved this story and it's just seriously so fucking awesome :D
    August 15th, 2009 at 12:29am
  • Tilers Haner

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    That was awesome hun! I loved the way you wrote it with the flashbacks :)

    Brilliant hun :) xox
    August 14th, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • Synfullytwysted

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    Oh I loved it! The way the flashbacks fitted in with what was happening in the present was so good, the mixture of emotions from being worried about meeting Brian to falling for him to finding out what a cheating ass he was in the end was brilliant. And him getting his comeuppance without her cracking and wanting to stay with him was the perfect ending.

    Fantastic job hun :) xx
    August 14th, 2009 at 08:48pm
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