Serenity - Comments

This was one of the best one-shots I've ever read! ♥
Oh, Logan .. I just commented on Use Me saying I'd read this tomorrow, by I'm so bad at remembering that I just had to come and read it now. I only have a few minutes to spare, but it was all worth it for this story. I wouldn't want to let you down, and it would have been a loss to me if I hadn't read this!
There are only a few one-shot that have really stood out to me as "one of the best I've ever read", but this has to be on that list now. It was beautiful.
Though confusing at times, I was able to understand it by the end, and it definitely improved the overall quality of the story - I love the use of darkness, mystery, and intense methaphors. And the fact that even in such a tragic, unusual situation, there was still a "bright side" - Paradise.
Your writing style fitted this story perfectly - many other writers (myself included), wouldn't have been able to do half as well writing such a unique, strange and wonderful story.
I have to admit, I was crying by the end - due to their deaths, as well as the magnificently played-out ending, which was happy in the sense that they were together again.
Well done, and thank you so much for putting in the time and effort to write this gorgeous piece!
:hug: :arms:

I gotta say... after so many readers only two comments from the same person?
It's a shame.

Aw, thats okay.

I can tell you worked really hard on that story. It was really, really good. : )

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This was so awesome, so completely different to any Frerard I've read. It was so dark and so intense, it was addictive. : )

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