Never Tear Us Apart - Comments, page 2

Corlin (100)

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Love it! Please update soon.
I cant wait to see what happens next!

September 4th, 2007 at 06:22am

xoxoBellaMuerte (100)

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Aww, this fanfic is adorable 8D

And I smell some inperfections. People, run for the hills!

September 1st, 2007 at 07:05pm

x-eyeXsing-x (100)

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wut can I say? It's gr8! u just got urself a new subscriber! just 1 suggestion, don't separate everything 2 much cuz it makes the chapter look longer then it is. separation between spaces is good, but a lil less. luv it tho!!!

September 1st, 2007 at 04:33pm

SNATCHLIPS (100)

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ooooooh really really goood!!!
whats going to happen??
gee isnt going to die is he???

September 1st, 2007 at 02:23pm

mibbba (100)

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This was a really good start. Your descriptions were strong and the whole chapter was sweet but not too mushy. I can't wait to see what direction you take this in.

August 26th, 2007 at 07:59pm