When Duty Calls - Comments

im really not crazy about how the present is in italics and the past is in regular text...its really confusing

So I spent the better part of the day reading this, just because it was that damned good!!!

I think Brian was being a selfish asshole. He wanted his cake and the frosting too. He allowed this to go on as long as it did. Which in turn allowed his children to get even more attached to Andi and vice versa.

I feel the most sorry for Conner. He loved Andi like she was a second mom to him. Which she really was. Hearing him call the child his sibling....I was almost in tears.

Andi...well I can only imagine how hard it would be to say no to Brian. Personally I couldn't. But she also knew what she was allowing to happen. If she'd been smart she would have left even after she told Brian. Or at least moved out sooner. It only allowed her, with pregnancy hormones I might add to become even more attached the kids and Brian. Not that he exactly turned her away. Two to tango and all that you know? ;o)

As for Michelle. I would seriously hope that woman is not that stupid. I get the sense that she knows a lot more than she lets on. There is a part of me that thinks she actually knows what's going on and doesn't care. Could it be perhaps because she has a little something something on the side as well? Hmmmm....guess I'll have to find out in the sequel.

Now onto the happy....I simply adore Jimmy and Rhian. Love love love them. I hope their relationship continues to flourish even further in the next story because as I've previously stated I love them. :O)

Eessh I hope this comment wasn't too long. I sometimes don't know when to shut up. hehe

Ok so I know I said I wouldn't comment until I've finshed the whole thing but.....Holy shit woman that was awesome!!!! The babysitter fantasy has never been put into words any better than this. A shag with the good looking rock star daddy....hot hot hot. And no I'm not at all bothered by the fact that Brian is cheating on Michelle. Ok off to get a few more chapters in....;o)

aww she left them need more soon hun sorry for the late read

Ugh what a way to leave me hangin! Good thing you got a sequel! LMAO *runs off to read*

I ran away? Well I may well just have to be the dumbest heavily pregnant woman in the whole of Orange County, because even though I can kinda see why, it's probably the most foolish thing Andie could have done. She needs to have someone close by, and even though I fully understands why she wants distance between herself and Brian, because of how he feels about her, even though he has a wife and a family, he's Abigail's father too, and she can't hide from him forever.

You know that I have loved every minute of this story, and I really really can't wait for the sequel so that I can find out just what my dumb pregnant ass has gotten up to! Wonderful ending hun :) xx

I'm so mad at Andie...I cant believe she would just run away like that!
I can't wait for the sequel!

:O I can't believe that! She's gone! >.< I hope she'll be okay. :[ I loved the ending! Great story! Off to the sequel.. :]

Already subscribed to the sequel :)

OMIGOD NO!
She can't just run away!
Jimmy's right! She's 8.5 months preggo! She can't just take off on her own! She could go into premature labor in the cab or some shit and then what's she gonna do?! Her baby's daddy won't have a friggen clue where she is, what kind of trouble she's in, or anything!
GAH.
I really, really, really hope I'm just overreacting with this.

DUN DUN DUN.

Dramatic ending.

Huh. I wonder where Andie went off to...

Can't wait for the sequel!

She left? Aww!
Very happy you're doing a sequel... please post the first chapter soon! :)
I can't wait to read it!

Only one more?! O_O No! ...I'm glad there's a sequel though. ^_^ Loved the update! Poor Andie...poor Brian...damn I have a feeling I know what's gonna happen, but I'll wait until you write it. :) More soon!

I'm so glad there is going to be a sequel!
This story always gives me such a mix of feelings. I mean I feel bad for Michelle, but I can't help really wanting Brian and Andie together.
I can't wait to see what you have planned for them! xD

Only one chapter left! Thank god for sequals =D

ughh I hate how complicated these two are! lol
really excited to see how you're gonna end this one!
cant wait for it!

Oooo what a pickle? To stay with Michelle or go with Andie decisions wont be easy.

Ugh as wrong as cheating is I cant help but loveeeeeeeee these two

I'm not sure how to respond to what Brian said...I just think it might be for the better if Brian just stopped falling for Andie. I mean it's a nice thought, warm and fuzzy and love and all that shit, but he's got a wife and two children! It's not the most romantic turn-out, but everything's already so complicated and he isn't helping at all. And now he's got Andie all flustered and it's just not working out.

Ooh! A sequel? Exciting! I wonder what shall happen. Hm.

Loved it! Can't wait for more! Even though Brian is frustrating me a little bit. But that's alright.

-sigh-
Oh dear.
This is becoming quite the tangled mess, isn't it? I can't even decide whether or not I want Brian and Andie together or not. Gah. I can't hate anyone in this story enough to decide. Michelle's too damn nice all the time and Brian...well, he's Brian. xD