I really, really liked this! :D I agree with your first commenter, Far Above The Moon, it was very interesting. I didn’t know it was a song though, but if I did know, I’d give some better feedback. But, I like some of the concepts behind a lot of it, especially She floated through her days, traveling silently from home to work then back as if nothing else existed. I don’t know, I just really liked that line.
Besides a few grammatical errors, this was brilliant! Love, love, loved it. <3
Anywwway, I like the approach you took on this. I always imagined that song being about two lovers committing suicide, but I like your interpretation too.
I agree with your first commenter, Far Above The Moon, it was very interesting. I didn’t know it was a song though, but if I did know, I’d give some better feedback. But, I like some of the concepts behind a lot of it, especially She floated through her days, traveling silently from home to work then back as if nothing else existed. I don’t know, I just really liked that line.
Besides a few grammatical errors, this was brilliant! Love, love, loved it. <3