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  • italicizedlies

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    I really enjoyed this one-shot. I loved the way you set it up and how it went back and forth. It was very interesting. I also liked how you incorporated the lyrics. It made me smile.

    Great submission!
    August 16th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • randy orton.

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    This is actually really nice :D
    I just got confused for a second around the end, I thought it was 2 different Jess. LOL. But, it was great! I love it :D
    August 15th, 2009 at 10:56pm
  • Josh Montgomery

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    Cuteness.
    August 15th, 2009 at 10:54pm
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