Can You Keep A Secret - Comments

So....I'm going to need more soon.

For some reason, I always love your Joes. This one is no exception. I really like him. Lol. And I knew deeeeeeeeep down he still loved Kevin. He makes me want to follow his storyline so I can see why he loves his 'stick up her ass' wife so much. He just has this great bird's eye view of everything that happens with his family and knows instinctively how to interpret it. Everything makes sense after you find out Joe's thoughts and feelings. I just see him as a more reserved, book reading, people watching, lovable man. *Sigh*

That scene where Dani held Ryan...tastefully done. I wouldn't have thought she would have done it. But I think it was right that she did. It just really makes you think...Ryan and Dani are both strong women...they care and care and care and consider everyone else. Kevin just really comes off as a selfish bastard. He neglects one and leaves the other, knowing full well he was half of why they came together, if not more. He's thinking of the kids...I just feel like his actions are a bit misguided or misdirected, you know?

As always, Nick made me smile.

And yeah....now that you've got your chapterly Heather comments....I give you permission to keep writing Secrets. Lol. (Just kidding...only not.)

Love you!

Okay...all the way up to Chapter Nine!

Oh MAN! I can't believe that sister of hers kept her from talking with her father?! WHAT?! That's craziness! I mean, I see where she was coming from...but dude. DUDE. That's just not your place!

I'm still not over the time when he was telling the kids.

I truly don't blame him for breaking it off with Ryan. He's going to have enough to deal with. But he's being dumb by blaming her...and I think he knows it. I suppose anything is better than blaming yourself at a time like this, though. I certainly wouldn't want to have to blame myself for my wife's death......wait a minute. I mean husband's death! Anyway.

It was heartbreaking the way he just went in there and...well, broke Ryan's heart. I admire the way she handled it.

I wonder if Ryan's sister will be right. I wonder if Ryan will run home now that Kevin left her.

And another thought I have is what the hell work will be like for the two of them, now that he has blamed her and dropped her like she was a hot potato. Eep. Glad I don't have to witness it live. It'll be painful.

I cried. And I'm at work on a break...so it sucks. :'(

Oh my gosh! I can't believe it! That's horrible!

Wow. There is just nothing like death to make you realize you care about someone...even if it's not in the same way you used to. I just don't even know what to say...I'm shocked.

Poor Kevin. Poor babies! And I can't believe his dad just hung up on him! Oh man! I understand he's disappointed because ... well, because Kevin doesn't have business trips...but still! The man just lost his wife and baby! Show a little compassion.

Must read one more!

I can't say I honestly blame Joe for slapping Kevin with a bit of reality. I would have cried, had he said some of those things to ME, but Kevo kinda needed it. Then again, it's not what really reached him, so maybe I'm wrong.

I am starting to feel bad for Ryan. I mean, I know she got herself into this situation, but it's just not fair what Kevin's doing to her. Or Danielle. And it's not fair what they're doing to him. Life is just not fair all around. :(

It makes me feel cold when I read about Kevin in his drug days. Seriously, every time there's a flash back to that time, I get chills...they're multiplyin'. Sorry, couldn't be helped.

Have I mentioned I love it?

Awwww, I can't believe Kevin gave a third of his company to Nick (and Joe eventually). How awesome of a brother does that make him?!

It felt like his feelings toward Ryan had kind of cooled in this one. It's probably just because he was so wrapped up in his own thoughts and mind. I hope he can snap out of it and deal with all the thoughts he's having.

I don't like how he and Danielle are around each other. I feel bad for them both...I kind of blame him more for the demise of their relationship, though. I guess since I have forgiven him, though, I just want him to be happy now. Lol. What can I say...I have a soft spot for those Jonas boys.

*Sigh* I'd like to see more of Ryan's story. She's interesting to me.

Chapter 6? ......Yes.

Okay, so I don't have a lot of time to comment, but I laughed laughed laughed that she had a crush on Nicky boy when she was fourteen. That's awesome!

I'm awfully glad Kevin didn't resort to drugs when he was so upset. That would have set him back so much. And by the way...I cannot believe Danielle drank when she knew she was pregnant!! I mean....seriously, you could hurt the baby!! :( *Disappointment in Danielle*

Loved it. Duh.

Boy, nothing like that news to make you wish it were "Puck's". I really love this story. The characters of his kids are really developing and I smile just at the thought of them. How precious they both are. I really like Nick's character too. Would you have guessed that? Yeah, I didn't think so.

Here's hoping for Danielle's infidelity too!!! Yay!

I gotta say, that dinner really tugs the heartstrings for old Danielle. But there is no excuse for the way she makes her children feel. None. They didn't tear her down with the drugs, booze, and infidelity. They don't deserve to feel neglected and embarrassed to be themselves in front of their own mother. Ugh. Bitch.

I was shocked at how open he was with Danielle and the rest of his family about being with Ryan. I guess I would be extremely bitter about it too. But STILL...*shakes head at Danielle's treatment of their children*.

I love how Kevin's reason for going to be with Ryan was "I love you." That was super cute.

Ummmm...Yeah, I can't remember what else I was going to say because it's really late and I don't function so well this late in my old age. Lol.

Three?

So...I decided to take that advised 15 minutes and start with this one.

And might I say: Wow. One chapter and I am already sucked into the world Kevin and Ryan are living in. And I love it! I mean...not that he did drugs and wasn't there for James while he was younger...or that he has to stay with Danielle and can't truly be with Ryan. But just because I really feel it all, you know? LOVE.

*Sigh* Damn, I missed reading stories. I kinda liked that bit about 'you'll take it and like it' Kev had going on when Ryan got pissed. Not gonna lie. Lol. Sucks for her that he can't leave Danielle, but those alpha males are always fun to read.

Do I have time for Chapter 2? I am in the middle of a night of "can't sleep", so might as well do something fun, right? Alright........twist my arm about it, why don't you? Here I go.

This past chapter was wow! Who knew that Joe would actually be so civil to Ryan like that and how the flashback really did explain a lot of things. As I really did think about it all, it sounded like Kevin being with Ryan made him feel better but I felt so bad for Danielle having to deal with the real brunt of it all. Hopefully Kevin and his kids can get through this so he can pull his head out of his rear end and go after Ryan.

wow this story just got so good. you are a great writer, making us challenge what we knew or thought we did. you makr us feel so many different emotions, the characters we hated are now ones we can respect. i cant wait to see where this goes next

oh my god, that was a little unexpected, I would have thought kevin would have leaned on Ryan alot during this time....Now he doesn't really have anyone to talk to talk to, I hope he can stay strong enough for the kids.

It's been a long time since I've cried this hard. Oh my goodness, this was incredibely sad, but so good. I love it so much.

I hate how people write Jonas stories and have them all hapy go lucky, goody two shoes...its so bland. you're story is dark yet so beautiful, a man loses himself only to be found by his true love, even if its supposed to be "wrong"
I did feel bad for Damielle tho...I love it, please continue

Wow! I really enjoy reading this story. It's amazingly good. I can't wiat to read more. That was crazy how Danielle died, I thought she would commit succide.

Wow. That is crazy. I love this, but this is amazing.

Holy shit.
I screamed that out when I read that and got yelled at by my mom.
Wow, so now they can be together, but it's going to be tough. And poor James and Nicole...
Great chapter! Don't keep us waiting too long!

I really like this story. I rarely read Kevin stories, but your writing and the plot is just too good to pass up.

I just started reading this like two chapters ago, and I really have fallen in love with it. Out of the three or four notifications I get I always read this one last because it is by far my favorite! Kepp posting please!