Perfect Strangers: I Never Knew You. - Comments

  • Mr.Sunshine

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    @ Death The Angel
    Thanks, Shaun is the easiest character to write for. He was the original inspiration for the series.

    Haha I know, thats the one part I think I can fix up now. A little proof reading would help.
    I want to go back through the first one as well and fix it up.
    March 4th, 2014 at 01:19pm
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    @ Death The Angel
    Thanks, Shaun is the easiest character to write for. He was the original inspiration for the series.

    Haha I know, thats the one part I think I can fix up now. A little proof reading would help.
    I want to go back through the first one as well and fix it up.
    March 4th, 2014 at 01:19pm
  • Jordypye

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    This has a lot of potential, I love reading Shaun's chapters the most, I have a soft spot for him Cute

    Only thing that I'd really say is to have someone proof read your work, help to improve it :)
    March 4th, 2014 at 12:24am
  • YeahRight

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    Yes I did c:
    February 21st, 2013 at 02:59pm
  • Mr.Sunshine

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    @ YeahRight
    Did you just read my stories... Like all of them?
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:36am
  • YeahRight

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    Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!!!!!!!
    February 21st, 2013 at 04:32am
  • D187824

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    aaaaaaah!!!!! i love it! who is the teacher?!!!! is it Dean?!!!!! is it matt? <<i don think its him cuzz he shouldnt be so pissed at shaun.

    NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Rhys better watch it! dont fall for her, pleeeeeeasse Rhys!

    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shaun, baby you are such a beautiful person. . . don't fall AGAIN!

    aah. . .interuption. . . ill be back to say more:)
    January 5th, 2012 at 02:33am
  • BEASTJAKE

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    Hey! This is really good so far. Cant wait for it to get into it more (: haha
    December 5th, 2009 at 11:25am
  • matthuee.

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    Wow, whose the teacher? If Shaun thought that teacher left... Matt?

    Omg. Shaun's going to fall for Christain and turn him gay xD
    December 2nd, 2009 at 11:56pm
  • Cash..

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    why has no one else commented DX
    thats like NOT GOOD!!!
    oh well
    i love it so much ^^ especially in chapter 6 with Shawn emabressed it was so adorable i could just see his face!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 01:31am
  • Shades Angel

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    OMG first comment on the series AND first comment here xD i steal your comment virginity!! WOO!! anyway...... hehe loved the beginning start off all sexual and stuff. if i was a guy i'd probably get a boner >> lmao. SO UPDATE!!!! GAH!!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 08:37am