Only In My Dreams - Comments

I like this. [It was a bit hard to read in a few places because of the color of the text/background]

There were a few grammer/spelling errors, and it seems like you might be able to make it flow a bit better. But I really liked it. If you make more I wouldn't mind reading... It was great =D

You need to change the color of the text, but it's pretty good so far...