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  • Aurielle

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    Well hell. I hate effing cliff hangers.
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • artemis1883

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    Another great update!!! ZV, you're such a tool!! And hello, cliffhanger much?? Who was that in the bushes?!?! Love the suspense.

    Keep it up! :)
    April 29th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • nana_loves_you

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    Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! I'm soooo freaking excited that you updated!! It was freaking amazing!! But all I gotta say is wtf?!?! Whose attacking poor little lily?!?! Ughhhh I hope its not some skank!! Haa aahh well I can't wait for more.... and love it really its amazing! Keep up this freaking work of art you got here(: love ya!!(:
    April 29th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • a venom

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    holy shit can't wait for more
    April 28th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    OH MA GUD. IT'S STARTING TO MAKE SENSE NOW.
    ASDFGHJKL
    But...he kissed her! And Zacky....
    But he was with Gena, right!?
    Right!?
    ;DDLKALDKL this is so messed up Dx

    I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY. NEVER STOP. ASDFHJK
    April 28th, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • HAIFISCH

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    Oh shit Michelle is pissed!
    April 28th, 2011 at 04:03pm
  • Dark Siren

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    YEEESSS! you updated lol i think Lilly will get away. or Oh OH! Zacky should come help them...eh nevermind. too cliche. ANYWHO!!!!! awesome update ^_^ and i think that person is Michelle in wolf form by the way lol
    April 28th, 2011 at 03:39pm
  • kalisweetblood

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    how dare you take so long and leave me hanging
    April 28th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • Lexie123

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    OH SHIT!
    Shit it totally gunna hit the fan now.
    Poor Lily, too much drama,
    Update soon :D
    April 28th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • Dark Siren

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    O_O *dies* omg i caught up with the story!!!!!!!! update please!! i love this story! T^T pwetty pwwweeeaaasseee
    April 19th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • GET!CRUNK!!

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    oh oh i know zacky is with gena so brian doesnt her to see it am i right?
    March 6th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • FullMoonLullaby

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    Omg I'm so happy you updated this! :D
    March 1st, 2011 at 03:18pm
  • dawn8279

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    I bet that Zacky was ther with Gena or Michelle was there with someone
    February 25th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • nana_loves_you

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    OHMYJIZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! HE KISSED HER!!!!!!!!! AAAWWEEE!!!!!!!! WELL NOT REALLY BUT YOU GET MY DRIFT(: AND I MISSED YOU BABES!!!!!!! AND YOU JUST FREAKING MIND FUCKED ME WITH THIS NEW UPDATE!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! LOVE YA!! TAKE YOUR TIME THOUGH NO RUSH(:
    February 24th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • Blueberry

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    The update was decent and worth the wait. It was good, like the other chapters.

    I believe that Brian saw someone, that's the only reason why he would kiss her....or he's just a confusin prick like that and just felt like revieling that he likes her that way.

    Either way, nice job. Can't wait to read more.
    February 22nd, 2011 at 03:17am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    February 22nd, 2011 at 02:43am
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    jfnvdkjnvbkdgjnedkjtmnhedrktjbgn
    HOLY SHIT.
    I wish I heard about this story earlier x)

    I fucking love it. Like, seriously. This is AMAZING.

    MORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

    ^-^<3
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • FeastOfVSenses

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    Write lots more. Now. Just saying.
    February 21st, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • Lexie123

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    Sooooooo...
    I totally think Zacky walked in the restaurant that's why Brian started kissing her.
    Other then that, Brian's ex? I dunno, I still like my first one :P
    But it was awesome :D
    Update soon :D
    February 21st, 2011 at 03:45pm
  • slumflower

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    Holy Shit...
    I'm curious as to exactly what was so important that Zacky had to stand Lily up, because now, Brian's kissing her. If Zacky ends up being told about this he really has nothing to conplain about, because he and Lily aren't dating, and he fucking stood her up.
    I wonder how she's going to find out that they're supernatural and stufff...
    Loved it, even though it's really been a while!
    February 21st, 2011 at 03:21pm
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