ha ha this was good im just gonna say this; that is my favorite song by bmth and you did very good with it so yeah =]
October 10th, 2009 at 07:29am
This was very well written. Especially the grammar and punctuation (Thank the Lord. I was going to blow my brains out if I had to read another one shot with no punctuation!)
Although, it was kinda short. :/ and you could have gone into really creepy, freaky, detail with this song, cause not only is it a BMTH song, but it's a messed up one. So, I think you could have done a little better there. This idea was a little unoriginal.
Anywho. You did a pretty good job. Thank you for entering.