Your Pain, My Pleasure - Comments

This sounds really good, I'm eager to read more. Update soon!

it sounds intresting, like it could go somewhere good...
so for now, i shall hope you update soon :)

I saw this on the Pimp & Rec thread and I'm really glad I clicked on the link.
Stories with sadistic Gerard always have me enthralled so I look forward to more of this. It's a cool idea.
xo

I like it. It's an original idea. :)

I saw this on the Pimping & Reccing thread and thought it sounded interesting so I decided to read it, and I can honestly say that it's a great start so far. I like the style in which you write; some lines are just so abrupt and to the point, it's really effective.

Such as: Stab. Tear. Stab. Fucking rip your skin right open.

Pour yourself out on the kitchen floor.

It's great the way it was described.

Also, you have a way with slipping in small comical lines which flow really well; something not a lot of people could do.

My favourites were: Different names, same outcome. Warning: may cause death. and Would you like some Cyanide with that wine?

Haha, loved it.

Anyway, just thought I'd let you know my thoughts on the story - you write really well and there were hardly any grammatical errors (I picked out three spelling mistakes, but no one's perfect ;)).

I'm definitely excited to read more. *subscribes*

Comments?
I'm really hoping this story goes far.