Secrets In Our Throats - Comments

Chapter two has me in suspense. These vampires that suddenly came really have me wondering what they want with Gerard and how they know Gerard's vampire 'sire'. You used a lot of descriptions and imagery which really helps set the mood. :)

This first chapter was very endearing. I noticed a lot of spelling errors, such a "our" being spelled as "our", but the spelling errors didn't take away from the story as a whole. I feel bad for Franky. He really loves his Gerard. :) <3

Hi! I decided to start with your earliest story. I know it may seem a bit amateurish in comparison to your latest stories, but it shows how far you've come as a writer since then. :)

Before I begin, might I say that I'm not a fan of MCR or at least not a big one? But that won't stop me from enjoying your story regardless. Let's get started!

The summary actually draws me in deeply and I want to know more about Gerard's predicament. My next comment will contain an actual comment on the first chapter. :)

Rose is a bitch!

Awesome I love it
"you're now my strong one Gerard"

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I got zee shivers

Awesome update! That was good. I can't wait for more.

Awesome. It's like Ferard meets Anne Rice meets Twilight, but better. Awesome.

LOVE IT!

Do they get killed or what?!?!

update now!

I read It;
Still dont like vampires
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but im sure ur ganna keep trying anways C:

MORE MORE ::clap!!!

xD

I love it. Ferard, I love it:

And be snappy about the update. unlike me :] :file: