Secrets In Our Throats - Comments

  • wish on a firefly

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    Chapter two has me in suspense. These vampires that suddenly came really have me wondering what they want with Gerard and how they know Gerard's vampire 'sire'. You used a lot of descriptions and imagery which really helps set the mood. :)
    February 27th, 2013 at 04:01pm
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    This first chapter was very endearing. I noticed a lot of spelling errors, such a "our" being spelled as "our", but the spelling errors didn't take away from the story as a whole. I feel bad for Franky. He really loves his Gerard. :) <3
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:56pm
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    Hi! I decided to start with your earliest story. I know it may seem a bit amateurish in comparison to your latest stories, but it shows how far you've come as a writer since then. :)

    Before I begin, might I say that I'm not a fan of MCR or at least not a big one? But that won't stop me from enjoying your story regardless. Let's get started!

    The summary actually draws me in deeply and I want to know more about Gerard's predicament. My next comment will contain an actual comment on the first chapter. :)
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:51pm
  • Ricky Gee

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    Rose is a bitch!
    July 12th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • Starlight Chaser

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    Clap

    Awesome I love it
    "you're now my strong one Gerard"

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    I got zee shivers
    September 3rd, 2009 at 09:59am
  • MyChemicalEscape

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    Awesome update! That was good. I can't wait for more.
    August 29th, 2009 at 10:44pm
  • MyChemicalEscape

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    Awesome. It's like Ferard meets Anne Rice meets Twilight, but better. Awesome.
    August 27th, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • Starlight Chaser

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    LOVE IT!

    Do they get killed or what?!?!

    update now!
    August 24th, 2009 at 07:38am
  • MGMTismyfundrug

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    I read It;
    Still dont like vampires
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    but im sure ur ganna keep trying anways C:
    August 23rd, 2009 at 08:30pm
  • Starlight Chaser

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    MORE Clap MORE ::clap!!!

    xD

    I love it. Ferard, I love it: In Love

    And be snappy about the update. unlike me :] :file:
    August 23rd, 2009 at 08:30am