Decisions, Decisions - Comments

You're fucking welcome for that long ass comment. Jesus Christ... XD
But anyway, I'm commenting AGAIN because I forgot to mention something. For some reason, my theme song for this was 'Breathe' by Michelle Branch. How I made the connection, not really sure, but it's amazing song and I guess it kind of relates to what they went through. It's a bit of a love song while also, not to sound redundant by stating the title again, saying that you should take a moment and just collect yourself. I fucking love it and it calmed me down when things weren't going the way I wanted them to in the stories. lol. Call me lame but whatevs.
Now that that thought's out of the way, I'll stop leaving comments now. Aha. Once again, amazing story. <3

I hate you.
This may seem a bit rash, but, considering my week, I think I have the right to say this. But hear me out.
Oh my God. So at first, I was hesitant with this story; starting with the first installment, I originally started reading it because I had the feeling it was an Alex fan fic. Even though it obviously was, I'd say the first... 15 or so chapters of the first installment had me confused on that. Because him and Chloe didn't initially have something, you know? You had Eric put in and that really frustrated me, by the way. I was like, what the hell is this? Why in the hell am I reading this if it's just pretty much saying that the only ATL connection was a mistaken hook-up and her brother being in said band?
But then, you had them get together, and that's when I finally realized that ohhhhh... this is indeed an Alex one. And so I kept reading.
Before I dwell into more of a review, let me just say that this story has put me through hell. Literally. Not only because of all the shit you had happened, the different twists and all the drama and what not, but literally... I am in fucking college. I started reading this Monday and finished at 6 AM last night. The night before, 7 AM. The last two nights I have gotten a combined total of 9 hours of sleep because of this damn story, while also trying to deal with school. I know that is for the most part my fault, seeing as hey, I guess I could've stopped and left it for another day, BUT GODDAMN IT. That would have actually been impossible. I would not have been able to sleep. This is how much your story has affected me.
When I wasn't reading it, I was spending that time WANTING to read it. It has been the only thing on my mind, all this week. And I fucking hate it. When stories do that to me I know they're fucking amazing. So let me just note that.
Now, getting onto the review.... ajiodasfjiwgfhorwgoregns,vjlsfejafdsfjkdaslgjksgkrw....
I fucking can't right now. That is what's up with that line. ^
I fucking love Alex and Chloe together. OMG. With the first installment, I could feel their love and when it all fell apart it upset me. When she was with Paul, I was going fucking insane. Literally, like more so than when I was frustrated that she with Eric. And I hated how things ended between the two of them because Paul seemed pissed at her for no reason; he knew what he was getting into when he started dating her. UGHHHH, like he was pissed that she still loved Alex, when hello, he's the one who moved in on her when she was still trying to get over him! That part made absolutely no sense to me.
But I am not talking about Paul any longer because I'll be blunt and say I did not fucking ship them. Yeah. XD
And then there was Logan. While Logan wasn't as annoying I still found it frustrating that he kind of put even more space between Chloe and Alex. But now that I'm looking back, I can honestly say I respect his character. He helped guide her and in all honesty, if it wasn't for him, she may not have even gotten back together with Alex in the first place.
GOD, now onto Alex and Chloe.... asjnajfsogfonsrlgsrlg...
I fucking adore them.
You are such an amazing writer, especially when it comes to the cutesy stuff. I can see why this story had so many readers now. I'm kind of sad I wasn't here when it was actually being written. But on my part, that's a good thing, because I didn't have to wait for an update. :P It would have fucking killed me probably if I was around when you were writing this.
You can just tell that he loved her so much and vice versa... the only thing that didn't make sense to me was why he cheated in the first place? I take it the reasoning was supposed to be assumed, like I'm thinking it was either just a mistake or he was just nervous about how deep he and Chloe were getting into their relationship at that point... but I found it weird that they never even talked about it. I was kind of expecting Chloe to ask why it even happened in the first place.
But other than that, I had no problems with the way things ended up. Because they ended up together and YAYYYY, that's what I wanted. XD
The only other things to note is that there were a few grammatical errors throughout the chapters, but I guess that's to be expected with older stories. And then the beginning of the first installment seemed to be a little TOO drawn out in my opinion, with that Eric dude and all. But I guess I don't really like the beginnings of stories in general anyhow. Aha. I like when it gets to the interesting parts, as presumably everyone else does. ;)
And then the parts when she wasn't with Alex seemed to be drawn out to me too, but then again, I guess that isn't technically fair to say since it was just because I wanted them to get together. lol.
But I stuck around, seeing how popular it was from comments and subscribers, so I figured it was probably amazing. And I was right. :)
Ugh, so like I said, I fucking hate you. Not seriously, but yeah. XD Excuse my bluntness but I blame my new obsession with ATL for that. I'm not even going to get started on how they have changed me, OMG. XD
This was really fucking AMAZING and I seriously... I'm so sad that it's over. I've got that Goddamn nostalgic feeling I get after reading a really good story. Dammit. This is all your fault. XD
Seriously amazing. Great job deary. I hope this review suffices for not being able to comment throughout the story when it was being posted... it's pretty hella long. :P
I was going to type this when I finished it at 6 but I figured I'd wait until I got some sleep. XD I wanted to make sure I at least sounded somewhat sane when typing this. XD If I had done it then, my God, the mess of a comment you would've gotten.
Anywho, keep writing. I see you've started posting again and I may very well check out that story too. Just because of my love for Alex Gaskarth. :)
But I'm still hesitant because I know I'll actually have to wait for updates this time around. XD WAHHHH...
Also, on a totally unrelated note, I found it funny you were in college while writing this. Because that's actually where I am right now and I can totally relate to that hectic-ness. lol. So perhaps it's good I waited; had i started this when you did post it, I would've been in 8th/9th grade. :o
<3
- Jenna

I did have fun catching up, just so you know. :) I absolutely ADORE this. You are an amazing writer. I wish I had the amount of talent you do! When I can actually picture everything that's happening like I'm right there with it all, I know that I've found an author that writes stories that I'm always going to keep reading. Seriously, I think you're my favorite author on Mibba. You're characters are so real that I'm actually sad when it's over. Now that, is true talent. Keep writing and I will keep reading, for sure. :)))))))

I like that someone is equally as nuts as me.Being that I wrote a fic mentioning forts and marshmellow gun wars.Plus I want to know......
How did you get to be such an amazing writer?
I look up to people who write as good as you.
Peace Love VODKA WAFFLES
ps.Dont let your hand get rapped by a camel >.<

I'm a new reader of the series so I must say first up I love you writing style, its very addictive. I love how this want predictable and the way you mixed everything up so readers seriously doubted if/how Alex and Chloe might end up together. The only complaint I have is there isnt enough, there is never enough good stories of ATL shenanigans and you write so well about them.
Thanks for the great read.

Wow....

Instead of going to bed and reading this sequel in the morning I pulled an all night and read it. It's now 11:49am and I haven't got an once of sleep since the last 26 hours and I blame this story.
But it was amazing. Everything about this story and the prequel was so well written and well planned and it was all just perfect. When I first read this duo I was like "this is dumb, it's just about this pothead eric" and then it just got all so amazing.

I. Loved. It.

Okay, so I never commented on Lasting Impression, and for that I hang my head in shame haha ;p
BUT! I'm commenting now.
I was totally team Paul. Never ever ever team Logan, but now glad that Alex and Chloe are back on!
You're writing is just too great.
The songs mentioned in this chapter were fantastic too. I especially liked the mention of Lights.
Gotta love the Canadian talent haha ;)

this story was truly amazing
I'm sad to see it go
but I'm glad I knew about and was able to read it

Ahhhhh! I'm sorry I'm so late on this. I haven't been on Mibba lately, for the some of the same reasons you have too, and I haven't been reading lately either! I just wanted to say that I love this story, and I'm not joking! I'm really sad that this is over now, but all good things have to come to an end right? I know I didn't stick for the last few chapters, and I'm again, really sorry for that. I know that feeling you described in the last author's note about not getting enough feedback, plot lines, creativity, etc. It's how I feel too. Okay, enough of me rambling.

I loved this story plot line since the beginning of the sequel/the end of the prequel. I just want to say that I loved your dedication and creativity to every sentence and words of these stories, and that you are one of my favorite authors on here. It's hard to find a good cliche story that is good, and makes me not want to stop reading. The time you've put into this is amazing, and I don't think someone like me could ever do that especially if I was busy in college like you.

Anyway, my favorite parts of the last few chapters was when Alex came shirtless on Skype. All I could think about was how hairy that guy's chest is! And Chloe finds that attractive!? Lol just kidding, but seriously. Have you seen it? It's so HAIRY. lol. My other favorite part was Chloe's parody to Hey There, Delilah. Honestly, that was brilliant to make up lol. I loved how she included a bunch of rhymes, while making it awesome!

Overall, this was a great series. I hope you continue your work no matter what, and I don't care if you don't update for a while, as long as you don't stop writing! That would be heartbreaking if you did. I'll probably read the other story tomorrow because it's almost six am here haha.

Good luck to future writings! Cheers! <3

such a cute ending.
gracie this was lovely, I'm proud of you.

and that ending wanted me to barf rainbows and puppies, it was just that cute.
:)

I made my mibba account just so I could read Lasting Impressions. It was the first fanfic I was ever exposed too. So I thank you for unveiling this wonderful world of creativity that I never knew about and inspiring me to write.... AS hard as it is to part with Alex and Chloe, I understand what you're saying. I think I'm also done with mibba. We all have to move on at sometime. I don't want to be a mother and still be writing fanfic. I need to live in the REAL life and be creative with REAL situations. But just let me tell you this, these stories have left a Lasting Impression on my heart. :-) You're one of the greatest writers I have encountered on here, and let me say, you know how to get frisssssky. So, have a great life Grace. For this will be the first time I log out of Mibba with no intentions of getting back on. You inspired me to write Fanfic, and you've inspired me to move on. Much love to you. :-)

I feel like a proud mother seeing this story come so far and end so amazingly. Although it'll be hard to say goodbye to Chloe and Alex, I'm sure they'll live on in other Mibbian hearts.
I believe that this is the longest story I've ever read on Mibba and it's by far been the best one yet. I'm so glad you had the time and love for this story that kept you continuing it.
Keep writing because you are an amazing writer. I can't wait to see the other stories you're going to write :)
Well done! <3 x

For the record, you are, my absolute favorite writer on here. And I love your stories. It makes me sad to think that I won't be reading much from you for a while. In the meantime, I'll be on the lookout for more with the incredilbe nack for good story telling that seems to be so hard to come by.

Please make it a short hiatus.

Ah, it's over. I like how it ended though, they were together and in love. It was a great story, both of them, and I loved reading them.

If there are no more stories from you, I just wanted to say I've enjoyed reading everything of yours. It's been a pleasure getting to know you, here and on twitter :-)

aw that was an awesome sequal!!
xD

I really loved decisions decisions and lasting impressions and they really did make me rather happy when i'd come on, and they'd be a new chapter=]
I do hope you continue with made for each other because its just lovely.

oh ya! and May God bless you too...

thank you, thank you and thank you. i just wanna tell ya how i appreciate the fact that u shared ur hardwork and ur precious babies (characters) with us. i'll be forever impressed with ur random scenes like the dog digging holes in the garden (was quite random to me), quirky and funny characters like jack and zooey, beautiful metaphores, extremely creative dates like raning picnic, sleeping on the roof (from jamais vu) and getting free shower from car wash (jamais vu), craxy sex scene with sweet cuddling as topping, written declaration of love in terms of lyrics or dialogue (they are always so sweet, honest and not overexaggerated)... basically everything. but what i am really impressed by your work is ur writing style. i like to think of them as Grace's signature. i cant really explain it but when i read it, i know it's urs. u have ur style definitely...

and also ur CREATIVITY! u have an amazing brain, i tell ya! btw, love the edited lyrics. was singing along to it as i was reading it.

anyways, Grace, thanks a lot! ^^ and all the best to ur college life!

I can't believe it's over!!! Though I TOTALLY would love it if you had done like a happily ever after story with marriage and babies and all that good stuff, I think this is awesome b/c it allows us to kind of make our own ending. I am sooooooo sad it's over.

Man...it's almost as sad as finishing Harry Potter. If you do continue to write Made for Each Other, I will be here. If you don't, I understand b/c life goes on, you grow up, you have responsibilities to deal with. Plus....I can understand that you want to put the best work as possible out there. And when you're more worried about that huge final exam for chemistry, your creative side takes a break. I hope we can stay in touch at least!

I hope only the best for you!

YAY FOR CHEESYNESS!!!
Man, I am sad to see this story go. Because I love it so much.
I 'awwwwd', cried, laughed so hard I DID cry, and was mad at anyone in the story who did something wrong.
But, I loved the way you ended it.
I'm content.