Erotomania. - Comments

I love reading stories like this, as weird as that sounds. This one shot is very different. Usually, people would write the story in the victim's POV, but you did it the opposite, and that surprised me in a good way. This is a very well-written one shot, most definitely. It was creepy, and unusual, and just all-around scary. You did a great job on this illness. Most people would've sucked so hard on writing something like this, but you did it very well. And I love, love, love, love, LOVE how you wrote her thoughts. This is one of my favorite one-shots.

This was unusual to read, it's not something I commonly read, but I actually enjoyed it. Kudos.

I wasn't catching on at first, but then it kind of hit me. I thought that it was the other girl who had the obsession, then right in the middle I caught on.

Usually after that I'd list the errors in the story, but really you have none. Congrats. You have a great writing style and unique wording. At first I was a little iffy about the short, choppy sentences, but the more I looked at it, the more I saw how they fit the story.

You are a fantastic writer, darling. I really loved reading this. :cute:

This was unlike anything I've ever read, in a really good way, Erin. :weird
I think that if you hadn't put the description of Erotomania in the summary it'd have probably confused me a bit, but because I knew of the condition I was able to follow it.
The awkwardness of the point where she walks up to the woman's door in a dress, holding flowers, was so evident it made me cringe. :tehe:
And the ending was perfect, too. This girl really does believe the woman's obsessed with her, and she's not going to give up.
Well done, I loved this. ^^

This... was weird to read. Like, fer srs, I was twitching when I read the part that involved the dress and the flowers and the weird awkwardness between the two.

But I think the way you wrote this was beautiful. The character development was there and I could clearly picture the setting in my mind--no matter how hard I tried not too, but regardless.

All in all, this was good. And wonderful. STOP UNDERESTIMATING YOURSELF. :don:

Wow, at first I thought it was the other woman that held the obsession for her, but you completely surprised me. This was beautiful to read, I like your writing style.