I really hope that that wasn't the last chapter. I'm completely in love with this. Dean is perfect, Juliet is perfect. Hell, Hunter is pretty awesome, too. Update soon.
So yeah, I just found this story today, and I really like it :) Even though it's probably gonna end soon, I thought I should comment and subscribe anyway. I love the little pictures and lyrics that go with every chapter. It's cute. And if I were Juliet, I would of been with Dean sooner. He's pretty hot ;) And that whole, "You want what you can't have," thing, is totally true. I think Juliet and Dean get along pretty well. And it wasn't really cliche, which is good :) Btw, I thought it was funny how in the beginning when she was talking about him she would use his full name. Haha :)
You know, at first I really freaking hated Hunter. But now I realize that I just kinda threw him into the bad category without giving him a chance, and he's proven himself to be an awesome friend.
This is the only story I've read where I DON'T want the girl to end up with the bad boy. I find Dean annoying. I want her to be with Hunter x] especially since Chace Crawford is scrumptious.
Firstly, I'd like to say that you don't DRIVE a motorbike, you RIDE a motorbike. My dad has a Kawasaki w650, and we have a little 250cc that I'm learning on. Secondly, Sam from Supernatural is the good brother. Dean is the sex-on-legs badass who gets covered in blood far more xD Dean is my favorite, then Cass xD
Now... I like this story =] well written, good chapter lengths. The idea is overused, but you've used it well. I like it =]
i'm really proud of Juliet for finding Dean! though i'm curious to see if she'll actually tell her parents. i would not like to deal with a mother like that!
& you already know what i think about writing the story from Deans POV
Nah, I think I like it from her perspective over his. We (basically) know how he feels about everything. In her pov, we get to see/experience more of her conflicting feelings, there's a lot more conflict. She's the one making the decisions now,and pushing the plot forward.
i adore your story. I've seriously spent the last hour reading it from start to finish. it's amazing, and if Dean were real, I would have married him already. Juliet needs to come to her senses :) i'm a sucker for bad boys, and apparently Juliet is too...even if she doesnt realize it. Update soon, or I might have to hunt you down i kid, i kid, kthanksbye :)
and about it written in his pov, i dont think i'd like it cause i've already read this one and then it would be kind of repetitive anyway. thats just me.
Update soon.