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  • SomethingDifferent

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    Oh snap I love your story
    November 11th, 2009 at 03:45am
  • Crazysabby

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    well congratz on the rewrite :)( me likes XD
    November 11th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • This Is Pointless

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    Aw, come on! MORE! MORE!
    November 10th, 2009 at 02:05am
  • Crazysabby

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    how the hell doers she plan to get close to him when she hruts him.. uggg ....
    October 30th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • Crazysabby

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    *sigh*

    why can't girls every be drooled at liek that in real life :P
    October 7th, 2009 at 06:59am
  • faithleilani

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    in love
    cant wait for more
    October 7th, 2009 at 01:16am
  • Saviour .

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    I totally adore this!
    I told you to expect a comment from me :)

    I have one negative comment to make, and it's not even negative, I'd call it constructive critism.. or a tip :)

    When you're writing quotations, you should really put a period or comma afterwards.
    “A pleasure…Miss Silver,” he drawled in his deep voice, lined with a sexy edge.
    See? Comma :)

    Anyway, I love it, and I really can't wait to see where you take it. And reading Crazysabby's comment above, I need to say, she's in the sixth year right? But is being sorted where she hasn't been to Hogwarts before? Right?
    September 5th, 2009 at 11:20pm
  • Crazysabby

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    i'm confused then, is odette getting sorted as a 6th year.. or is she a first year?
    September 5th, 2009 at 09:22am
  • faithleilani

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    poor fred
    i love it
    cant wait for moreDance
    September 3rd, 2009 at 01:40am
  • Green Raspberries.

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    WOAH! I love this story, update as soon as you can please, I have already subscribed and such.
    August 27th, 2009 at 03:06am
  • Crazysabby

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    oooo i lieks it :)

    yes longer chapters plzz :XD

    *subscribes*
    August 26th, 2009 at 01:32am
  • faithleilani

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    loves it
    too short :(
    i want more
    cant wait for it:Dance
    August 25th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • faithleilani

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    omg i love it
    cant wait for moreDance
    August 19th, 2009 at 11:57pm
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