My Wings Are Black - Comments, page 7

SomethingDifferent (100)

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Oh snap I love your story

November 11th, 2009 at 03:45am

Crazysabby (100)

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well congratz on the rewrite :)( me likes XD

November 11th, 2009 at 12:51am

This Is Pointless (100)

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Aw, come on! MORE! MORE!

November 10th, 2009 at 02:05am

Crazysabby (100)

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how the hell doers she plan to get close to him when she hruts him.. uggg ....

October 30th, 2009 at 01:24am

Crazysabby (100)

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*sigh*

why can't girls every be drooled at liek that in real life :P

October 7th, 2009 at 06:59am

faithleilani (100)

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in love
cant wait for more

October 7th, 2009 at 01:16am

Saviour . (100)

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I totally adore this!
I told you to expect a comment from me :)

I have one negative comment to make, and it's not even negative, I'd call it constructive critism.. or a tip :)

When you're writing quotations, you should really put a period or comma afterwards.
“A pleasure…Miss Silver,” he drawled in his deep voice, lined with a sexy edge.
See? Comma :)

Anyway, I love it, and I really can't wait to see where you take it. And reading Crazysabby's comment above, I need to say, she's in the sixth year right? But is being sorted where she hasn't been to Hogwarts before? Right?

September 5th, 2009 at 11:20pm