The Diary of a Secret. - Comments

  • totheark.

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    I'm glad I finally got caught up <3 The latest chapter especially was wonderful. On one hand it was so innocent and sweet and carefree, yet there was still an underlying sadness about it, that Ariana doesn't get the all the time. It's beautifully written, my dear, you should update as soon as you can! =]
    March 6th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • nearly headless.

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    Samm, you updated :)

    I feel like Ariana is my little sister or something. I want to protect her. Anyway -- the way she goes about rebelling feels sincere, because she's never really been normal before, and of course she would leap at the chance to feel that way.

    I missed this story.
    February 9th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • Caravaggio

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    I really would like to know the whole story of her attack that you've alluded to so many times, though I'm sure you've already got it in the works, threaded throughout the story.

    I really love how her rebellion is so innocent, yet it could make such a huge impact on her life. For someone who's never interacted with people outside of her own family, going outside and potentially meeting people is a huge step.

    Great chapter!
    February 8th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • nearly headless.

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    AHHHHHH!

    Me likes, dear. Me likes. Yeah, it was a bit short, but still lovely. . .

    Keep going, and going, and going. . .and ohmygod, I've turned into the Energizer Bunny. Great chapter tho!
    December 14th, 2009 at 12:01am
  • Caravaggio

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    Glad to finally see something new with this story!

    It was a bit short, but I think it served it's purpose. You found a definite ending to it, and going passed that would have just made it awkward.

    Anyway, it was a good chapter! I can't wait to see what comes next!
    December 13th, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • nearly headless.

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    yay yay yay yay!!! I looooooooove this...it makes me feel bad for poor Aberforth......y'know, that boy needs a nickname. Like Abby, or Forthie....hmm.
    September 13th, 2009 at 07:19pm
  • Caravaggio

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    This story makes me feel so bad for the family. I always knew the story behind Dumbledore, but this makes it all so much more real.

    Very nicely done.

    Love Sheen
    September 13th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • Caravaggio

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    Another great chapter. Very eager to see what happens next. :D

    Love Sheen
    August 30th, 2009 at 12:09am
  • nearly headless.

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    Yay! I'm liking this chapter.

    I love Aberforth, and the way you wrote him is amazing.
    August 30th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • totheark.

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    Yay! I love it =] I decided I would comment it here too, seems it's that awesome.

    I really like this chapter. I love the simple but really sad way Aberforth says goodbye to Ariana, and you can just feel how sad but how used to it she is. Poor thing =[

    Can't wait to see more!
    August 29th, 2009 at 11:53pm
  • Caravaggio

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    I figured as long as I was making your banner, I'd better check your story out. And I'm so glad that I did. You don't give yourself nearly enough credit for your writing. This is really very good.

    Love Sheen
    August 25th, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • nearly headless.

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    Very cool! I like the way you wrote it. :)
    August 23rd, 2009 at 05:46pm