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That other story still isn't finished?

That other story still isn't finished?

That other story still isn't finished?

Fucking awesome damn keep going

HOORAH! I can't wait to see how this story plays out. I am totally in love with your dark humor. Big fan, you have no idea.

Looks extremely promising
Your such and amazing writer

Damn it, now I'm going to have to wait for each chapter on this one too. I knew it was a bad idea to read this before you had a few chapters up but... Well I'm not very smart and patience is not one of my virtues. :) Awesome new story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Holy moly, one chapter, and I'm hooked! Update please? :)

I liked the first story, it was AMAZING!!
Please update soon.

Haha. I loved the part about the grey hair.
It was beyond funny to me.
Yay! This is a Matt one. I'm happy.
Can't wait for an update.

this sounds really promising
my kind of story:D

I'm becoming obsessed with your stories! There goes my school work... Oh well. <3

My neglecting Mibba is obviously an issue, how could I have just now found out about this gem? I am so stoked to read more! You are a fantastic writer!

I was laughing when she was beating the shit out of that guy. lol. Yeah I know I'm sick and twisted but oh well. I rather liked it a lot. I can't wait to hear more! *subscribes*

This is the 1st chapter.
You do have to start somewhere. :)
It's good so far, I'll wait till you give us more
=]P

Man, I hadn't even realized that the first chapter was already out. I am so beyond happy! Simply because when Unwanted in Wonderland ends, I'll have something just as amazing and completely different to read! Plus it's written by you, so it'll good.

I love how sinister you made her seem. Wait, what was her name? Ah, right we don't know yet, making it even better! I love the fact that she's so sarcastically dramatic in a sense. The comment about the grey hair in the end was pure awesomeness! I also love the dark humor, it's biting and gives me the creeps, in a good way of course.

More than anything, I am bathing in the bliss of this being a Matt story, because I absolutely idolize the guy. Mostly musically, but that face and body....damn....haha, sorry went off on a different tangent. You have the amazing ability to translate your characters' feeling to your readers (at the very least me) and make me feel close to them, sympathizing with them. I can't wait! I really love it so far, and despite having read only the first chapter I cannot wait to read the rest and find out more about this new mysterious character.

Oh my. Just this chapter alone leaves me discombobulated. Minus the fact that this has Matt in it (which is a whole other story... lol) this is definitely something I would love to see more of. See, you already have see at the edge of my seat wanting more. Amazing work. I thought "Unwanted in Wonderland" was indescribable yet this will be just as mind-blowing.

This is amazing!!!!!
The plot is very unique and the way you've written it is mind blowing!!!!
More soon?

so, you may, or may not, know that i love your writing.
The fact that you're writing an M. Shadows story just makes me need a new pair of underwear.
I cant wait for the next chapter and I can tell i'm going to love this story.
<3<3<3

i have a feeling i am going to love this story as much as i love your first story, which is a lot.