Father, Forgive Me - Comments

I'm confused as hell, but I'm 100% sure that this is going to be epic...

At least this time I can say that I've been here since the beginning.

Jesus, I need to start paying more attention. I didn't even realize you'd posted this. I blame the cold meds and very short attention span.

Anyway...

Just as good now as it was the first time I read it. Seriously, I think this may top UIW. I can't wait to see where its going to go and the surprises you have in store.

I'm very excited.

monkeytattoos:

On a scale of 1 to awesome you're the shit. I love it so far.

I agree. Your Freaking awesome!

well, it's very descrptive.
but you spelled slid wrong.
just keeping it real like you said.
i like it though, seems okay enough.
and bubble gum and rainbows?
that's not how your other story was to me.

Looks excellent so far, can't wait to see how the story develops (Y)

I already can't wait for this story to begin.

I gotta say, I'm intrigued by this.

Very, very intrigued.

I'm rather fond of anything that involves organized crime, and I'm curious as to where this is going.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

<333

this should be good...a female drug dealer that is nice at what she is doing, don't read much of that on here. and i can wait for Matt he is always worth the wait! :mrgreen:

I really love this so far. I have to say; it's definitely more dark than Unwanted In Wonderland, but i get the feeling it's going to be just as good. I can't wait for more to get a real feel of the story, but i think i'm going to love it.

Very excited about this story. Can't wait to read more!

Damn, this story is going to reach ten stars in no time, that's a given :)
Loved the first chapter, I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story!

love it....the suspence and violence!! another big one!!

I already like the sound of a strong female character. The fictional world needs more of them. Very much looking forward to the next chapter. (:

...all i can really say is WOW

I think your THE BEST writer on mibba that i've seen so far, and this story is not describable, which means it's awesome :)

On a scale of 1 to awesome you're the shit. I love it so far.

Just have to say: Fucking awesome!

Fucking awesome! I just want to ask one question.
Will the chapters in this story be as long as the other story's chapters?
Other than that, I fucking loved it!

i actualy already like this one so... *Subscribes* :D next chapter soon?

You had me sooooooo happy when I saw that you had posted the first chapter. And you're right it isnt like Unwanted in Wonderland. I like that though, I can see what else your genius mind can come up with. It was a good intro into the lead character of the story, gave me an idea of what she is about. And so far I can tell she is one bad ass chick that takes no ones shit. AWESOME!