Cynical Relations - Comments

wow, i really like this.
keep it up :D

Amazing story,no ofense sucky ending which is why let me explain clearly a sequel must be written to excuse ur poor ending,im soorry i sound mean im just fishing for any excuse for a sequel please do write one:)

Please write a sequel, this is amazing!

i just wanted you to know that I really liked this story, and that I am looking forward to a sequel. :)

Wow! I'm truly mesmerized by the way you write! It's not like any of the other stoies I've read, this is something you could've found in a best-selling book. Great story!

whoa whoa whoa.
WHO DOES DRACO THINK HE IS TO SAY HE DOESN'T "NEED" HER?!?!!
whhaaaattttthefuccckk.

UPDATE. please (:

Is it not going to have a happy ending? :( I really wanted them to end up together...

yay! an update!(:
another please?

amd dear lord, i want some draco, although he's kinda on my bad side now. nice job fucking things up with lacie, stupid draco.

Hey... Hi, Alex! Well, I've only read ten chapters and a half of the eleventh after writing this, but I couldn't stop myself from reading. I only paused for awhile to congratulate you, since you're one of the best (and your stories are so damn freaking AWESOME)!!! I also found your stories of fiction very catchy. You captured Draco's snide facade and (in my opinion,) romantic ego. And about Lacie (ahem), she's cute. But too vulnerable (as you said, she's still kind of naive, and new at some person/thingy, esp Draco). :)

Well, the fast pace of the story really doesn't affect (and matter to me) the whole story. The whole thing's fresh and crisp as a baby is to the world. You kept me invariably intrigued, and I love that feeling. Thanks for sharing your talent. I love that side of the story, and your wits. (Darn you, you're making me fall for Draco Malfoy, even though my favorite is... Harry Potter! Yeah, right. Just the opposite.) The characters' are cool and crafted artistically by your creative mind. :)

To sum it all up, you're just damn COOL! This just started with a hey, but I'll end it with a smile. Good luck! :)

This has become my favorite draco malfoy story, no joke.

SO UPDATE NAO OR I WEEL HUNT YOO DOWN.

and i like the fast pace you're going at, every chapter is exciting.

and i kinda wanna see the heartbroken side of the naive lacie, and the regretful (but not showing it) side of draco.

ANYWAYS.

i like this story, i subscribe,

you update.(:

Hey, it's been a super long time, but I read your update, and it made me remember how much I absolutely love your stories.

Just so you know. Awesome update. I hope you continue with this one. :)

i love this story!!! please please please update!!!!!

its amazing

Ohmygod why has this not been updated?! O.O
loveee<33

this story makes me get some serious butterflies in the stomach and i don't know why. i normally prefer draco a little meaner but i think you write him well. cannot wait for the next update!

Update please soon I want.... no I NEED to read more.
It's very good and you're a great writer. I can't wait to read more.

um... I don't exactly get where this is going, but I guess I'll find out soon?

i really really wanna know what happens next
update soon please
great story btw :D

I wonder what her next move will be...

three people aren't the golden trio, are they?
he got busted... too bad too, because they were so cute together.