This was amusing. It was kinda like a light-hearted, kinda corny, scary movie. Thats a compliment! ( I hope). I mean Im not sure the mood you were going for but it comes off as like an old B rated horror movie. The dialog is what does it mostly. It keeps it from being too intense. It makes them not seem really desperately scared. I liked it.
Okay just a few story line questions. 1- where did Gerard get a bat from? 2- broken glass and porcelain? porcelain? porcelain from what?? and 3- Gerard nailed wood in the church windows. ...nail? like with a hammer? I guess he keeps a hammer next to his bat huh? lol.
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