An Opening Heart. - Comments

xXxWickedAngelsxXx (150)

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LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

July 14th, 2011 at 04:35am

Alphabet Soup (100)

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Well, I wish you the best of luck in the competition!
Though,I would re-read the story. There are a lot of capitalized words that shouldn't be, and when you write “I must get you a new Kimono Rin.” there should be a comma between 'kimono' and 'Rin'.

Other wise I though it was good. :cute:

September 5th, 2009 at 04:38pm

Moonlit Serenade (100)

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SESSHOMARU!!!!! xD

lol, I'm sorry, but he's pretty much amazing. Love him <3
Rin is also cool too.

Anyways, aw, this was sweet! I enjoyed reading this. Pretty good for you first one.
I mean, I definitely would faint if he kissed MY forehead.

August 23rd, 2009 at 04:27am

ontheedge91 (100)

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awww. i liked it. it's really good. i've always liked Rin.

August 23rd, 2009 at 01:47am