Invincible to Every Sharp End - Comments

  • squidward tentacles.

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    Oh my word! I had forgotten all about this. Went snooping through my subscription page and came across it again. I still love it :) You should finish it.
    May 14th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • lions

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    I love your writing, but I hate cliff hangers. Haha, update soon please! :-)
    August 30th, 2009 at 02:39am
  • Zaruba

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    Hey! I live in Vegas! We should get it started now! lol

    Anyways, 2 more excellent chapters! You update quickly, I like that in a writer. Some writers will keep you waiting forever. They were good chapters too, but I have no clue as to how the titles tie in with the actual story! Maybe I'll get the next one?

    As for what should happen...hmmm...I can't think of anything to add. You're doing an awesome job.
    August 29th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • lions

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    The background does rock, every once and a while i have to stop reading and look at it. Haha keep writing your really good.
    August 27th, 2009 at 07:24am
  • Gummiibear

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    I really like the first chapter. After I read it, I was trapped. It sounds really interesting and the background is flawless and in a way, matches the story.
    August 26th, 2009 at 03:26am
  • xXxBroken;BleedinxXx

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    dude! I love ur background!
    August 24th, 2009 at 10:37am
  • lions

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    wow youw riting is so good, it sounds proffesional! I really like it, can't wait for maore, and I think you will go far!!!
    August 24th, 2009 at 10:11am
  • xXxBroken;BleedinxXx

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    Yeah, it was kinda like mine! xDDD
    I like it, though. Nice beginning!
    August 24th, 2009 at 04:41am
  • Zaruba

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    I like the way you write. So articulate and professional like. I think this will be good, because the opening was that great. You have an excellent way with words as well as clear descriptive prowess.

    I will subscribe to this.
    August 23rd, 2009 at 02:38am
  • lions

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    i cant wait for the 1st chapter 2 come out... update soon!
    August 22nd, 2009 at 10:38am
  • squidward tentacles.

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    It has definitely caught my interest. =]
    August 22nd, 2009 at 06:34am