Oh my word! I had forgotten all about this. Went snooping through my subscription page and came across it again. I still love it :) You should finish it.
Hey! I live in Vegas! We should get it started now! lol
Anyways, 2 more excellent chapters! You update quickly, I like that in a writer. Some writers will keep you waiting forever. They were good chapters too, but I have no clue as to how the titles tie in with the actual story! Maybe I'll get the next one?
As for what should happen...hmmm...I can't think of anything to add. You're doing an awesome job.
I really like the first chapter. After I read it, I was trapped. It sounds really interesting and the background is flawless and in a way, matches the story.
I like the way you write. So articulate and professional like. I think this will be good, because the opening was that great. You have an excellent way with words as well as clear descriptive prowess.