He's Strong. He's Hot. He's Foreign. (And He's in the Mafia?) - Comments

Oh and I loveedd the whole POV change you should do it more often, i like knowin whats going on in peters head =D

Emmm Peter... Definatly Gaspard Ulliel, he'd fit perfectly!

And Jane... Megan Fox? She has the green eyes. Or Jessica Stroup would suit perfectly!

Maybe Ben Barnes for Peter?
Jane, I'm not sure...

Omg...I honestly loved this update. The chapter was awesome!
More soon please! Hurry!
xx :D

Owhhhhh... This is awesome!!!! =D
It's freaking good...
I want to know what Peter's going to say...
I knew Peter can't just stay put... =D
That's why I love him...
I can help you with finding pictures and all..
but I mean I can't really remember how you describe Jane...
but well I think Amanda Seyfried could be great??
I mean I always see Jane as the soft looking type..
or Miranda Kerr...
but I don't who portrayed Peter the most...

I love this story!!!!!!
I just found it and once i started i couldn't stop
Its awesome!!!!!
Update seriously soon

So, like many people are asking - when's Peter coming back???????
Jeremiah was acting - brotherly. Is that even possible for him? lol
But nu mate u've done an awesome. I really felt like i was apart of the story, a character observing evrything.

AMAZING

loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant believe Jer showed some humanity for a change! When is Peter coming back!?

This story is Amazing!!! i love it!! The characters are great. Can't wait to read more

no problemo chica it was a great update!!!! but where is peter and her brother was actually pretty chill and i still do think that he has a much bigger part in this.... she cries a lot and i tolly get that she shouldve because she was getting raped but when she said that she was a dependant crybaby i was like ohhhh yeah kinda lol still absofuckinglutly love it though

dont worry it isnt your fault it happens to everybody.just this time you should probaly do it on mibba so it will save it for you.but great update anyway.

Yeah Where's Peter???

WHOO AN UPDATE. When's Peter coming back?

Wow, Jeremiah just showed a bit of humanity.
I must read more!
xx :)

I knew there are good in Jeremiah..
i just knew it... That's why I can stand him...
Unlike Gabe who is an incredible ass....
Peter! =D is gone... =.= but good anyway...
Love it... =D

update soon???? ur killing me here

It's awesome!!!

it's great..
I can assure you that it's great and awesome...
It's totally worth the wait.. Peter's great as always being perfect and sweet,,,
and I like the flashback thing...It's very sweet and you know I love sweet...
I can actually stand Jeremiah now.. so I'm guessing it's good..
update soon!

I love this story!!! Best mafia romance I've read so far!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter :D

yay i love this story so much... he brother is a bigger part then what u are letting on i think i mean whats with those nija skills looooovvveee it

The best! I can't believe this story, it's sooo good.