Doctor Jones - Comments

oh and okay kaylz dear i shall check the grammer nxt time:) thanks you for the comment

hey this is back up and running again now, lol so umm wat do you think for the first update in 5 months

Nice update, but take care with your grammar, Lis. :]
I know you said about it, but it really helps. (Y)
But nice chapter. (Y)

xxx

lol:P i love them, i think its cuz i liked them when i was younger

oh my Jesus!!!!!! are you a mind reader cuz i spent my whole weekend watching there videos on youtube. i know to some people there so uncool but there so awesome

Yeah It is good :]

Though I have to say, just lay off the A/N till the end... :]

Keep going :]

xx

I like it. :] It's very interesting. And different from the other stories on Mibba, which are all band fics (and mostly Green Day and My Chem).

The one thing I didn't like is the Author's Notes in the story. It's not advisable to put them in stories, you should wait until the end. It's distracting to the readers and plays off like a journal entry.

You should try puncuating better and captializing where needed.

Everything else is fine. Keep going. :]