Suddenly Visible - Comments

LOVED THE STORY JUST FOUND IT TODAY

Loved it!

Aww, that was a cute ending!

=}

I bet the sequel will be just as awesome!

Loved it! You're an awesome writer.

LOVE IT...can't wait for the sequel. Are you going to attach it to Suddenly Visible (sorry meant connect it)?

just read the entire story again because I felt like it and I am begging you to update. Begging!! If you could see me youw pups know that I am on my hands and knees begging!! If you do I will give you a virtual cookie!!

Omg I can't believe I just found this story! It's amazing

This is so good!! Please do the sequel!

aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeee poor baby girl i know how it is with freaking asthma it is a biotch and he is really scary but this is just so sad she is just a little girl and she is going to have to be getting insuline shots awe that shizz hurts like hellz my little cousin is like that he always cries. :( well I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUAL I WILL TOTALLY READ IT AND COMMENT LIKE THERES NO TOMORROW if you do and even on here if that will convince you on making a sequal <3

AMAZING story I loved it! Next chapter?:)

omg....poor Baby girl!!!

Hot damn.

Asthma (ah, hell, I can't spell it, whatever) and diabetes? That sucks so bad.

But they're tough. They'll get through it.

Loved it! Can't wait for more! Sad that it's ending, though.

Aw poory Jasey! I hope she's going to be okay, and I definitely don't want this story to end yet! More soon, and sequel please?

More soon please
Poor Baby girl

girl you better do a sequel. When I found this story I read the whole thing at once, no stopping. Please do a sequel!!!!

Poor baby girl
poor momma
sequel?
*nods*

AWE poor Jay Rae and Steph and Jimmy...you know what ...POOR EVERYONE..... :(
it was good

You have to do a sequel! :)

amazing story

Loved the story. Absolutely awesome!
RIP REV<3

Loved it! That wasn't the end though, was it? More soon?