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I love that kid!
Are you magic? O.O

nice update ;)

I knew Devin had to be related somehow to Jimmy!
Well, she'll get a taste of motherhood before Jasey Rae comes along!
Haha, Steph to Matt: "I'll deal with you later." haha. You're dead, Matt, you're dead.
I wonder why Cariena is AUNT C. Odd. Maybe Cariena was his real mother.
I dunno.
Loved it! Can't wait for more!

I did not see that coming
I'm so glad that you're back

Awsome

I quite like this =]
I do hope Steph doesn't get mad at Jimmy over Devin...

i did not see that one coming! but its so cute! i think that he will fit in just right with them :)

Oh. Maybe that's why he reminded her of Jimmy.

oh!

I have no idea how she killed Devin mom.
I don't even have a guess.
I feel really sorry for Devin.
I mean what kind of twisted evil sick woman locks her kid up in a dryer?
That's just wrong.

Chapter 41: Stephanie is going to be a great mom...she's already acting like one with Devin.

I really like this story u should update more

Well. At least we know what's wrong with Jimmy!
But I get the oddest feeling that something bad's going to happen...because Stephanie was talking about not saying good-bye to Jimmy anytime soon. And that could be clever foreshadowing on your part. Maybe I'm just seeing things. 0.0
Devin sounds like he looks like Jimmy. Maybe he's Jimmy's long-lost child! 0.o
Loved it! Can't wait for more!

poor jimmy has to go through all that
loved the update
<33

that poor little boy
but wow
this chapter rocked
cant wait for the next one

Dude, Steph should adopt that little Devin kid or something. That'd be sweet.

*is at your medical mumbo-jumbo beck and call* Blame work. I pick it all up there, lol!

Excellent chapter! I do want to see Devin again =). I also wonder how Jimmy will fare during his day in the hospital. It's not terribly exciting (note where I work), but you do meet some interesting people from time to time.

Well done!

sorry if it took me a long time to comment
my laptop is completly dead and it wont even charge
so until it magically starts working again it may take me some time to read the updates

no no no no no no
dont do this
dont you do this to jimmy
especially when my computer is all messed up
and can only get on mibba when my mom isn't home