Tricks on My Mind - Comments

Sneeb. :tehe: I know that was totally incoherent, by the way.

This totally left me in a bumbling mess, man.

It was just so... desperate, I guess could be the word.

The ending killed me, I swear it. :cheese: Poor Cat and Andy.



I'm apologizing for the fail of a comment now, by the way. :XD

Oh, sweety, that you always demand a comment and I never know what to write, really xD I could just run around squealing and write that into a comment and post it, but I think that's not what you expect xDDDDDD I'm trying, okays? xD

Firstly, I do love the story <3 The idea is just perfect. It fits them so exactly in some twisted way that I sat here, feeling my heart ache :( It's fucking well written, just as nearly all of your stories and I so adore this one. It's awesome! The way you describe feelings makes me feel like feeling them as well, like being the one feeling them!

BUT! (uhuuu a but xD) I don't know if that was said in the contest to do it that way, but I would be very interested in why exactly they are not allowed to love each other (I know, band and stuff like that xD but you could have mentioned at least something xDDDD)

Okay, I ran out of ideas... I love your... sentence structure? ... I should end it here before this comment embrasses me later on.

(I let smileys talk ;) )