Life Sucks, Big Time - Comments

That was really well written. I like the way you know the characters. Jasper is very believeable. So is Harriet (which is sad, 'cause fakes like that shouldn't exist, but do). I reckon writing is like drawing; you actually have to know about who/what it is you are writting, otherwise it's just dead words.

Harriet sound like a really fake person but I like the way you write her. That probly made no sense at all but I ment the way she seems to know nothing about what she is doing.

Jasper will be in deep sh*t if her mom see the cuts.

Can't wait for more.

*subcribes*

xoxox

Heh, Harriet sounds like some of the people on deivantArt. And I do have to say, you've got to at least have some sort of idea of what their emotion is beyond the fact they're a person.
Unless it's just practise.

love it

awsome dude! rite more! its so gud!

That there, is good writing. I applaud you and wish you would write more of this gritty, yummy stuff.

awesome, i just read it. update soon please!

Riiight, so where is this story gonna be heading?

& & when you said you started a new story, I though you meant like at least 2 chapters! lol small chapter!

Sounds good, Harriet sounds like Furry O_O

Poser Emos suck =P Big time.