Mist Always Covers Mystery - Comments

CountryGirl712 (100)

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WOW this instantly drew me in and got me hooked. You are brilliant at keeping an interesting plot and not warbling on for ages, which is something that not many people can do. I would say just add a bit more description but other than that this is brilliant, definitely recommending and subscribing.

October 5th, 2014 at 02:58am

marshallomnipotence (100)

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I read "Secret Pregnancies and cheating bitches," I was drawn to it. I don't know whats happened in previous chapter sp bare with me. I love the layout and the gif of the crowed, thats really smart. I actually think the sentences could have been shorter just easier for me to read. I think it's pretty cool and I shall read from the start. Please keep going I'm excited to read more. ANd I'll subscribe cos it's so good.

August 9th, 2012 at 03:25am

Nereid (930)

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@Sunshine Suicide

Correction, "YAY I'm so glad WE re-wrote this!"

August 6th, 2012 at 03:40am

katediplodocus (100)

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YAY I'm so glad you re-wrote this!

August 6th, 2012 at 03:16am

Ivy Ray (100)

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Just fimished this story and I really love it!! I have found that I really like My Chemical Romance and The Blackout and I have them both on my I-pod!!!! :O I think she should have a little boy called Jamie :D Not sure why but ah well :D Love you! x

June 1st, 2011 at 11:44pm

katediplodocus (100)

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I less than 3 you too Zoe Bear, I may update tonight since you asked me soooo nicely!!

November 22nd, 2010 at 10:43pm

RWAR (100)

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update kate, update i say ;)

i less than 3 youu :) x

November 22nd, 2010 at 10:28pm

xXcrazy-desiXx (100)

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awesome story.

November 17th, 2010 at 01:35am

stay weird (100)

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hmm i like this so far. i wonder what frank is gonna do though?? update soon. :D

September 29th, 2010 at 10:28am

Nereid (930)

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Well done, Cupcake! You've made the story really good and I love the new layout :) I actually laughed out load when Kandy was singing Finding Nemo songs :) Brilliant!!!!

August 12th, 2010 at 10:53am

katediplodocus (100)

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I LOVE YOU HOLLY! =D YAYAY, and also, KANDY BABY!

June 9th, 2010 at 10:25pm

emzxxx (100)

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i think gerard should save her
franks a dick
it would be cool if we could hear more about her past

June 8th, 2010 at 02:00am

Mr. Darcy (16090)

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Hey *awkward waves* so....I've actually been with this story since the beginning....through the very, very long waits...and not once have I commented.
I feel so bad.....
Sorry.
Anyway, I think she should die...only cause I have a heart like that...and death is my favourite thing so I will always go with the death option, unless it's in a frerard, that's different.
Okay, now I'm rambling. Sorry.
But yeah, this is good...and I am soo sorry for not commenting earlier...

June 3rd, 2010 at 06:59pm