Paint Me A Picture - Comments

wow.
Just, wow.

He killed Gerard?
hm, that's interesting.
=P
But its like, he killed Gerard just because Gee wouldn't use Red? And then this cracked me up, when Frank was waiting for Gerard to wake up, when he never will. hm.

Its freaking eerie.. sick.. and amazing. And so wonderfully subtle. :)

O_O
....i can't blink....
damn you and your utterly amazing stories...

o WOW. gruesome...but i like it...kinda like "A Tale Tell Heart." that was such a freaky story. but funny when he was like "i think it was his EYE!" i just started cracking up and we were reading it in class...it was funny

That. Was. AMAZING!

I loved the fact that the starting and ending paragraphs are identical but their meanings are so different. Someone once told me that I was an underappreciated writer, along with her and you.

I am definitely checking out more of your stuff. Amazing.

Frank killed Gerard. AGAIN. Once again, this is your fondness for making Frankie kill people. oh, boy.

It's amazing, Horsie. But all your stories are. Hoe do you come UP with these things?

Hey I really loved this story also!! ;)

i love it, cnt describe how good it is

all i can say is you are Jesus, and Can I be a desciple?

i'm sobbing. I'm literally sobbing. That was amazing.
:O

horsieeeeeee. your one-shots make me too emotional!! gah! you make me feel like I'm writing baby stories.
"the cat is brown. the cat can jump."

TEACH ME YOUR IMMORTAL WAYS!!!

that was genius. i loved it!

Amazing. Simply amazing.

Wow, this was, just wow.
i cant pin a certain word on it, cause it was just soo awesome.

At first it was confusing a bit. But then, i read it again, then i got it perfect.
I love how you repeated the first paragraph as the last paragraph.

i agree with the person above me.
I've never read anything like it either.

It seems like all of your writings leave me wanting more.
And i love it.

You have become one of my favorite writers on Mibba now.

That was so...i dunno words can't decribe how good it was. I've never read anything like it, it's so orignal and awesome =]

-haute couture

The words flow quite smoothly in this story.
I really like that you repeat the first paragraph for the last. It seems to tie everything together. Not to mention that paragraph is worded just . . . perfectly.

This is probably my favorite line:
It did really happen, after all. It makes sense to him, but not to me. Artists are like that, I guess.
I like how people have quirks that we just simply excuse away.

I was, like Frankie, quite floored when Gerard told him to quit drinking. It wasn't expected. At least not to me. But it fit. And fit damn well.

The repetition of the paragraphs, once more...
It gives you the view of what happened with the same words, but they hold such different meaning.
Beautiful.

i agree with all of the above peeps! i like a psycho MCR member once in a while. poor Gee though. YOU KILLED HIM!! HOW DARE YOU!!! but i LOVE it. keep the writing coming!!

I just read it again and I'm commenting because last time I forgot to say something:

LOL @ pshycho Frank. He wanted red in the picture. He put red in the picture.

Have you seen this movie ''Rage''?? It's a sequel of this 80's movie called ''Carrie''. Well, in this Rage movie, the guy at the end loses his mind and the last image is him staring at the mirror, completely lost and gone.... That's how I picture Frank in this story, still waiting for dead Gee to wake up.

O_o

(This is gonna be a long comment, I can feel it *lol*)

It's the perfect circle fic! Holy *whatever could express my feelings enough*!!!
Okay, so Frank killed Gerard, and I'm gigglesnorting in a weird way right now, buuuuutttt this is amazing. I'm very jealous of your writing skills because you, my dear, are a genious. Wy I haven't read anything by you before remains a mystery.
*slaps self*

I never noticed it was Frank and Gerard, and I was slightly confused at the beginning, but I loved how you repeated the first paragraph in the end. I'm pretty much speechless - which is a good thing :P

One-shots ---> easy to write
GOOD one-shots ----> difficult to write
PERFECT one-shots ----> written by you!

You... damn I love your writing. Actually, I don't hate you as much as you said I would. Mostly because I was prepared, I think. I absolutely love the basic idea, the idea that he sees that neither of them are perfect. Even in the first paragraph where he describes the dark ink dripping, I was kinda thinking maybe it was blood. Very morbid and matter of fact (in a brilliant way ;D). And you know what? It's insane, it describes someone with a mental health issue, but it makes perfect sense. Gah, I love your stories and I'm jealous of your writing skills.