A Friendship To Last A Lifetime - Comments

  • But but but
    it's done
    *has massive tantrum*
    No way.
    Ima go check out your other stories n shit....
    only coz you own =D
    March 25th, 2008 at 10:30am
  • Gahhhhhhhh. 'Twas WONDERFUL. =]]
    An excellent ending.
    AND you thanked me!!

    -------> I'm off to subscribe to the sequel. <33
    March 23rd, 2008 at 04:18am
  • I'll give you an essay. That was a motherfucking awesome story. It was like a fairy tale with the whole happily ever after thing. I bet those guys last forever. I HOPE THEY STAY TOGETHER IN THE SEQUAL!!!!!!! They will right? I soooooowanna start reading the sequal but I can't yet cause I'm still typing this. Now i'm gonna stop typing and go read the sequal. Well.....great story! C ya xoxoxo
    March 22nd, 2008 at 10:55pm
  • ..Where to begin.

    Every time you'd update i'd let out a loud squeal..
    && the double and triple posts.. an even louder squeal. xD
    Im kinda upset it's over *sheds tear*
    But, i can't wait for the sequal!!!
    So Basically..
    This is the best fic i've EVER read. <3
    Your the greatest writer in my opinion. (:
    Thanks for making the greatest story,
    I got SO attached to it.

    p.s your sex scenes are better than the real thing!!!

    ILY! <333 :cry:
    March 22nd, 2008 at 05:05pm
  • ..Where to begin.

    Every time you'd update i'd let out a loud squeal..
    && the double and triple posts.. an even louder squeal. xD
    Im kinda upset it's over *sheds tear*
    But, i can't wait for the sequal!!!
    So Basically..
    This is the best fic i've EVER read. <3
    Your the greatest writer in my opinion. (:
    Thanks for making the greatest story,
    I got so attached to it.

    ILY! <333
    March 22nd, 2008 at 05:05pm
  • ok i dont think ill be able to write an essay but lets see how we go
    1 this is the best mother fucking story ive ever read
    everytime you up dated you left us all on the edge of our seats
    when gerard and racheal broke up you made sure that we got the message clear and that we got both sides of the story and we got what they were both going through

    if anyof that makes any sense to you
    im so glad that there is a sequal to this mother fucking story it is the best and i sign off with

    A story to last a lifetime
    =)
    March 22nd, 2008 at 04:45am
  • :arms:
    March 21st, 2008 at 08:51pm
  • OMG it's the end Cry

    You want an essay? Alright then, you asked for it...

    1: All the tension in these chapters, it's a wonder the site hasn't exploded by now! Honestly, the way you write, I felt the pressure building up inside my own chest from it, and I bet everyone else did too. All the anxiety pictures teenagers perfectly, I don't think it could have been any better on that point.
    2: The characters are awesome. They are so believable, it made me think that when I walked into school I would see them waiting! And they stayed true to their personalities all the way through, instead of suddenly changing to fit the story better. That is a sign of a great story, continuity within the characters.
    3: In contradiction to the last point, the characters also made subtle changes as they grew with each other. This again is important because otherwise they might get boring and always say the same things. Not something I could say about AFTLAL. And they all ahd their own little surprises, which kept the urge to continue reading alive.
    4: The way you write is almost completely immaculate. There were a few moments when I didn't understand how something had happened, but it was either explained later or outweighed by the amazingness of the rest of the update. You use the english language to its full potential.
    5: You update so regularly and sometimes more than once in a day!!!!! I wish I could do that! You are truly inspired. And what you come out with always has an effect. The speed at which you can write doesn't affect the quality at all, unlike sometimes when someone has to update but can't think of anything so it turns out kinda shit.
    6: All the little twists and turns made it so energetic., and an exciting read. I was surprised by the abuse which meant that you ahd hidden it really well, but it worked! Even though it's not a very nice thing to happen at all it gave the story a little more depth.
    7: I loved the storyline. As well as that it is so easy to relate to. Making it all the more believable and important. If you can't relate to something it's very hard to keep interested. Not once didn't I smile when I found out this had been updated.

    Anyways, essay over, in conclusion that was one heck of a story and I'm gona subscribe to the empty sequel now!

    TTFN amazing author!

    Luv Iona
    x x x x x x

    By the way, this is only some of what I thought of the story! I think this alone will get boring so I didn't want to write anymore just in case you die of boredom!
    but thank you for writing this, and I'm so happy there's a sequel, it will be really interesting!
    March 21st, 2008 at 07:28pm
  • WOW......that was one of the BEST storie......wait, it WAS the BEST story that i have ever read.

    and i cant wait to read the Sequel........because it is gonna be just as goood...

    XoXo Fuck Sincerely........

    THIS STORY IS AWESOME........<3<3<3
    March 21st, 2008 at 10:26am
  • :cheese:

    IT'S DONE ALREADY?!

    Definately a re-reader.

    I can't wait for the sequal, and what they'll have to face. CAuse right now everything seems perfect, so what could go wrong?
    Message me when it's up please :]
    I'll love you forever! XD
    March 21st, 2008 at 09:33am
  • I'm all sad now because it's over. But do I have to write a friggin' essay? It's 12:30 AM and I'm sleepy...........

    I hope you're gonna have a sequel for this. Seriously, I do.

    More sex should be in mind. Naughty Nyam xD
    Yesh, I'm a pervert at times. ^_^

    Also, LESS STUFF THAT TURNS MY GOOD MOOD UPSIDE DOWN, PLEASE. I don't wanna kill myself over mother fucking fictional characters!...or do I? :weird

    :arms:
    The hug's for the story, not yooooou. Yoooooouuuuu donn'tttt dessseeeerrrrrvvveeeee ittttttttt. JK. It's for you. [x That is, it's for you...if you post a sequel. xD haha. :roll: I'm fucked up, I know.

    There's yer Goddamn "essay," or whatever it is. Disgust Are you happy now? :P

    [EDIT] Page claim! It shall be named....Steve! [/EDIT]
    March 21st, 2008 at 08:31am
  • Awww!!!
    loved the update =D
    March 11th, 2008 at 11:06am
  • That last chapter was NOT crappy. It was awesome.
    March 9th, 2008 at 06:07pm
  • naw so cute <3
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:55pm
  • awww so cute more soon please
    March 8th, 2008 at 11:50pm
  • Woooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    They're back!
    And they're back together!
    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy

    I've missed this.
    And great update, I really hope the last line turns out to be true!!!

    Luv Iona
    x x x x x x
    March 8th, 2008 at 10:44pm
  • I read it, and I was all like "nooooo. the end!"
    But then I saw the A/N. And did a little victory dance since it was in fact not the end. =]]

    Moreeeeeee!<3
    March 8th, 2008 at 09:18am
  • Aw, that was sweet.
    BUT I WANTED SECKS! ">.>
    *crosses her fingers after eating a taco*
    :D
    March 8th, 2008 at 06:09am
  • -crosses fingers-
    :D

    That was really cute. I'm so happy they're together again. :D:D:D
    March 8th, 2008 at 02:50am
  • oh.my.god.
    i thought you gave up on this, and that this was the last chapter.

    *stops hyperventilating*
    <3
    March 8th, 2008 at 02:33am