From Square One to Point B - Comments

  • Jackalope Crossing

    Jackalope Crossing (120)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it. :) Thanks for the contest!
    August 30th, 2009 at 05:21pm
  • mr. owl

    mr. owl (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This was really really good. I liked it a lot. (: I like how you compared being in love slightly to Harry Potter.

    I also liked how you kept mentioning random things that had to do with being in love, that really don't.. If that makes sense.. (:

    Like the whole muscular male thing. (:

    I could totally picture her sitting on the couch watching Harry Potter and looking around the room at her friends.

    Very well written. I liked it! (:
    August 30th, 2009 at 11:11am