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awesome great for my contest!

Wow!
I feel so sorry for you and myself for not seeing this fic before.
I would have gushed in every single one of our comments and PM you incessantly to turn this into a chaptered or at least many many character development short story collection. Do you wanna do that? I wanna do that!

Okay, okay on to the review. I seriously love this little character insight one-shot. You captured her very essence on paper and what was so amazing is that her little thoughts and movements were so canon that I can't help but give a little "oh!" of surprise at how amazingly real she seems like. There were moments where she was so self-assured and confident, to the point of arrogance but there were moments, when the dark lord is concerned, she falters and wonders and hesitates.
I do not believe that she and him have a sexual attraction towards each other but her loyalties so strong. All this captured to perfection too!
My god, seriously. Make this into a short story collection! Please, please with a little snitch on top?

XoXo
Emmy

My dear incestuous person. XD Oo
No, seriously, this one rocked my world. I'm not big on HP fanfiction, but I loved this one.
You portrayed the main character so well in all her cold demeanor and stress of thinking about the Dark Lord and his opinion on her. And the repetition of the infidel sentence was very striking and left a huge impression on me cause that little word meant so much to Bella.

I know this review sucks, but I'm really tired.
I loved it.

its fantastic, but i have to admit i dont get it... ive only watched the films and read the last book... why is she an infidel? isnt she voldemorts favourite?

This is so amazing. I loved it so much. I loved the images you capture and your style of writing, so vibrant and rich.

Wowza.

This has been one of the very, very few HP fics I have read. Usually they're kinda bland but this one is delicious. God I sound like I'm talking about cakes.

I love stories that look beyond the exterior and into the mind of the 'baddie'. It makes it so much more interesting. I love the whole idea of the story, her wedding and how she only wants Voldemort. Also, nice touch with the capitalization of He, like if he was her god.

Rodolphus’ lustful, greedy gaze penetrated her and suddenly, her beautiful ring lost its crystal sheen. The white of her dress seemed grey.

These lines spoke out beautifully, even if I have no particular reason.

This was...wow. Brilliant.