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  • bubbly-dummy

    bubbly-dummy (100)

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    hey im currently doing a fan fic on
    bill kaulitz, check it out ^-^
    <3
    June 28th, 2010 at 12:57pm
  • Pineapplez

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    yes.
    January 31st, 2010 at 05:28pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    That’s the difference between morning and night: mornings are sloshy oatmeal in plastic bowls with bottle-blue rims; nights are over-heated casseroles and sickly-looking fruit from a can.
    I love the metaphors you think of here. I was actually almost gagging as I pictured the food that you chose to identify with the night and day. Like...ew. And that's agreat really awesome thing, because physical reactions from readers are telling you you're doing a good job.

    ...I just realised how perverted that sounded.
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    I wonder if he still has the bloody red scratches down his face to prove it.
    Oh, that is...*searches for outdated word that no one else will use*...that was righteous xD
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    There’s nothing missing in my mind; I know I’m not an amnesiac.

    I know I’m not sick.

    And I know I didn’t do anything wrong.

    What I still don’t know is why I’m here.
    Mm. Powerful, son! xD

    I really like the idea of this. It sounds really good =] I can't wait to see what you have planned.
    August 25th, 2009 at 02:47am