EightyOne TwentyThree - Comments

I said to myself once upon a time that I would get through all your slash fic at some point and for whatever reason, I've decided to attempt to start that challenge at midnight on a Wednesday. So, hi. I apologise in advance, lol.

Okay, this was super cute. I really liked it. There is not enough adorable baby Zalex in the world and also I love flashbacks in a story (presumably you do too considering this fic is like eight years old and you're just published one present day that also has flashbacks omg). But Alex basically proposing to Zack on someone else's wedding day!!!!!!!!! Little thunder-stealer.

It's so weird to think about Rian marrying Kara now tho like with him and Cassadee engaged but I actually kinda like seeing Kara pop up in fics. EVEN THO IT MAKES ME FEEL OLD AS HELLLLLLL, I wonder how many younger/newer ATL fans don't know who the heck she is omg.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I know this has been out a while but I've only just got chance to read it Its brilliant!

Eep. I've read this countless amounts of times (do you know how much Zalex there is out there? Yep, not a lot.) but I still fangirl and I love it so much. It's great. Really =)

sdfasjgewa what, why have i never read this before. fuck you are perfect.

oh my jesus this was actually the perfect fanfiction
i've always secretly shipped zalex over jalex
and i always say rian needs to get married
omg
i love you

*me being pathetic*

after a horrible day, in which I snapped at my best friends and tackled my teacher during flag football tryouts, and then proceeded to miss all his throws, this was an amazing pick-me-up.

Almost cried. You made my week.

Amazingly cute!!!! haha :D

i lovveee ittt

aww, that was so cute.
i loved it!! :-D

Awh. x]
Well here's a little criticism for ya - sorry to ruin the train of good comments, lol. >.<

The beginning - how you described Zack's memories slowly, bit by bit - was good. Good pace, nice use of GPS and the whole "You have reached your destination" thing.

I think the Alex running up to Zack thing was a bit rushed though. You could've made it a bit longer (I mean, the beginning was so much longer) and added more emotion to it. And find it funny how Jack and Rian were there to witness it, haha.

But all in all it was good. :]

Awh. x]
Well here's a little criticism for ya - sorry to ruin the train of good comments, lol. >.<

The beginning - how you described Zack's memories slowly, bit by bit - was good. Good pace, nice use of GPS and the whole "You have reached your destination" thing.

I think the Alex running up to Zack thing was a bit rushed though. You could've made it a bit longer (I mean, the beginning was so much longer) and added more emotion to it. And find it funny how Jack and Rian were there to witness it, haha.

But all in all it was good. :]

From the Superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Conest

I gaped. I'm not even joking, my heart did this weird thing, my stomach bottomed out, and my fingers tingled when I read this. It was insanely good. The way you described everything was awesome. I could the emotions and it was like I was there.

I really liked the way that Zack remembered it. It felt like I was being slung back in time and that I was actually at the house. The way that Alex reacted when Zack told him he loved him was so realistic.

It was really amazing and I enjoyed reading it. (:

Hey. I'm from The Superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Contest. Sorry for the wait!

This story was honestly really amazing. You described the scenery so well without using a bunch of paragraph, and that's really hard to do. Props to that. Also, the emotions in this story is really just... 0e8wpjogrth. I could almost feel what Zack's feeling.

My absolute favorite part was:

Zack’s heart skips a beat – it’s a familiar sensation and he welcomes it. Alex must be serious. He wouldn’t joke around like this if he wasn’t.

“So… you love me.”

“Yes. Be my boyfriend, marry me. I don’t care. I just need you.”

Needless to say, this story was just absolutely amazing. Keep on checking the thread for the contest results! Good job, and good luck.

this was soooo cute!

Awww quite cute. I had a feeling something like that would happen when he got down there :D Great job

Aw that was cute =D
I loved it <3

awh!!! I got to admit, this made my day. It's really cute.

awh!