April 20th, 2017 at 01:28am
EightyOne TwentyThree - Comments
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I know this has been out a while but I've only just got chance to read it Its brilliant!February 23rd, 2013 at 06:45pm
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Eep. I've read this countless amounts of times (do you know how much Zalex there is out there? Yep, not a lot.) but I still fangirl and I love it so much. It's great. Really =)June 6th, 2012 at 03:59am
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sdfasjgewa what, why have i never read this before. fuck you are perfect.January 21st, 2012 at 09:35am
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oh my jesus this was actually the perfect fanfiction
i've always secretly shipped zalex over jalex
and i always say rian needs to get married
omg
i love youJune 25th, 2011 at 02:33am -
*me being pathetic*
after a horrible day, in which I snapped at my best friends and tackled my teacher during flag football tryouts, and then proceeded to miss all his throws, this was an amazing pick-me-up.
Almost cried. You made my week.May 11th, 2010 at 10:53pm -
Amazingly cute!!!! haha :DOctober 28th, 2009 at 01:51am
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i lovveee itttOctober 25th, 2009 at 04:17am
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aww, that was so cute.
i loved it!! :-DOctober 2nd, 2009 at 09:14am -
Awh. x]
Well here's a little criticism for ya - sorry to ruin the train of good comments, lol. >.<
The beginning - how you described Zack's memories slowly, bit by bit - was good. Good pace, nice use of GPS and the whole "You have reached your destination" thing.
I think the Alex running up to Zack thing was a bit rushed though. You could've made it a bit longer (I mean, the beginning was so much longer) and added more emotion to it. And find it funny how Jack and Rian were there to witness it, haha.
But all in all it was good. :]September 30th, 2009 at 11:22am -
Awh. x]
Well here's a little criticism for ya - sorry to ruin the train of good comments, lol. >.<
The beginning - how you described Zack's memories slowly, bit by bit - was good. Good pace, nice use of GPS and the whole "You have reached your destination" thing.
I think the Alex running up to Zack thing was a bit rushed though. You could've made it a bit longer (I mean, the beginning was so much longer) and added more emotion to it. And find it funny how Jack and Rian were there to witness it, haha.
But all in all it was good. :]September 30th, 2009 at 11:22am -
From the Superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Conest
I gaped. I'm not even joking, my heart did this weird thing, my stomach bottomed out, and my fingers tingled when I read this. It was insanely good. The way you described everything was awesome. I could the emotions and it was like I was there.
I really liked the way that Zack remembered it. It felt like I was being slung back in time and that I was actually at the house. The way that Alex reacted when Zack told him he loved him was so realistic.
It was really amazing and I enjoyed reading it. (:September 27th, 2009 at 06:27pm -
Hey. I'm from The Superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Contest. Sorry for the wait!
This story was honestly really amazing. You described the scenery so well without using a bunch of paragraph, and that's really hard to do. Props to that. Also, the emotions in this story is really just... 0e8wpjogrth. I could almost feel what Zack's feeling.
My absolute favorite part was:
Zack’s heart skips a beat – it’s a familiar sensation and he welcomes it. Alex must be serious. He wouldn’t joke around like this if he wasn’t.
“So… you love me.”
“Yes. Be my boyfriend, marry me. I don’t care. I just need you.”
Needless to say, this story was just absolutely amazing. Keep on checking the thread for the contest results! Good job, and good luck.September 27th, 2009 at 05:56pm -
this was soooo cute!September 7th, 2009 at 11:38pm
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Awww quite cute. I had a feeling something like that would happen when he got down there :D Great jobSeptember 7th, 2009 at 11:33pm
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Aw that was cute =D
I loved it <3September 6th, 2009 at 03:17am -
awh!!! I got to admit, this made my day. It's really cute.August 31st, 2009 at 10:44pm
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awh!August 25th, 2009 at 03:41am
Okay, this was super cute. I really liked it. There is not enough adorable baby Zalex in the world and also I love flashbacks in a story (presumably you do too considering this fic is like eight years old and you're just published one present day that also has flashbacks omg). But Alex basically proposing to Zack on someone else's wedding day!!!!!!!!! Little thunder-stealer.
It's so weird to think about Rian marrying Kara now tho like with him and Cassadee engaged but I actually kinda like seeing Kara pop up in fics. EVEN THO IT MAKES ME FEEL OLD AS HELLLLLLL, I wonder how many younger/newer ATL fans don't know who the heck she is omg.