Did We Drown Too Easily? - Comments

You're a phenominal writer. I love this sooo much.
Update soon please?!?! :D

Holy crapola!
That was awesome. That was completely and utterly crazily good!
Overwhelming, even.
Grand. Breath taking. Splendid. Tremendous. Remarkable. Amazing. Awe-inspring. Astounding. Wonderful. Fantastic. Magnificant. Excellent. Terrific. Cool. Groovy. Signifigant. Suberb. Glorious. Brillant. Outstanding. Marvellous.
And a whole bunch of other words I'm too lazy to look up.

I can't wait to see what you're going to do with the next chapter. I'm quite excited, and I hope Allie really gets herself figured out.

x.

I'm not sure why you didn't like that one. I thought it was pure perfection, as always.

Quinn was pretty harsh, but I think it's what Allie needed to hear. Maybe he was harsh enough to make her wake up and realize that she needs to clean her act up, before she loses everything.

This update was amazing, hun, and I can't wait to see what Allie does next.

I loved it! I didn't think it sucked at all! And Quinn was soooo harsh. I loved it! It was nice seeing him give her a harsh dose of reality. 'Cause Quinn basically summed up what I wanted to tell Allie! Gah. I want her to stop drinking! I want Jeph to actually ... I dunno, help her? I can't wait for more, Lindi! Great job!

Btw- 'My compassion was buried deep.' -- What an awesome line.

Lindsay, hun, you have done it again. Do you sprinkle highly addictive substances over your writing, because your stories always leave me wanting more. I didn't know she was going to be an alcoholic.

I'm dying to know what happened the night before. I hope it was nothing too bad. I was happy, in a weird sort of way, at the last sentence. It's good that she wants to change. I just hope it isn't too late.

I can't wait for more!

I so cannot wait to see where you're going to take this, it's going to be amazing (obviously).
Update soon! And update fast ;)

xo.

Lindsay!
I LOVE this. Every single fucking word. You never cease to amaze with your incredible vocabulary and writing skills. Your writing seems to suck me into the story and this first chapter has got me antsy and wanting to read more.

Please, update soon. I have a strong feeling that this is gonna be so interesting. I do wish however that it'd be longer than just a short story.

Keep up the great work, babe!

Sad one, but ts going to be a great story from what I've read now (:
Keep it up (:

You know, I never have anything creative enough to say that could possibly put my thoughts into a true perspective. And you know me, normally I'd just say that you're amazing, and you continue to amaze me, but it really just doesn't work anymore... This was truly wonderful. It's so good to have a Jepharee story that isn't horrible.

I haven't exactly looked for any lately, but I don't think any could match up to this.
Also, I hate when I read something new you have started... because it is the biggest downer when you want to continue, but you've got to wait.

I'm so stoked for this, boo.

OhmyGod.

It's honestly like nothing I've ever read before, but I shouldn't even be surprised. You always do this! Go above and beyond...

When you gave me the small excerpts, I had a few ides running around in my head about what the story could be about. I had no idea she'd be an alcoholic!

I hope she does change and I hope Jeph goes all cute and supportive on her ass 'cause she needs him. Gah. I cannot wait for that second chapter! I kinda wish this was longer than just a two-shot or a three-shot. But that's okay!

I can't wait for some Jepha action! Btw -- The Quinn part made me smile.. I don't know why, but picturing his cute little blonde head made me smile. He's just too dam pretty!

Great job, sug! <3