I have to say, that although you have a good storyline, the last chapter lacked descriptions, which in turn made it a little uninteresting, the first two chapters were good though XD
OMG! I can only guess what happens next. Damnnnn, her and Lacy's little moment there ;) Haha. And then Matt comes into the picture! :O If I were her, I would have kicked him in the balls for what he had attemped earlier! I love this. I love your stories. Update again soon!