Deathbat Squad! - Comments

Johnny fucking Christ that was AMAZING! I NEEN MORE! <3

"It’s useful in a life or death situation. Or when Brian’s hair isn’t listening to him."
Best. Quote. Ever.

ROFL brians hair powers <3 gah I died, this is amazing.

I nearly pissed myself. The hair...lmao. *waits for more*

HAHAHAHA!!! I love this!!! Cant wait for more!

three: Still loving this. Love Matt's, Zacky's, and Brian's powers. Wondering what will happen next? Subscribing by the way.

two: Loving this more and more. Wondering what the girls expressions are going to be? Can't wait to read and find out.

Effing loving this right now. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

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"My hair! It… I can make it move." He sighed. "My hair has a mind of its own."

Jinx jumped back into the conversation. "That explains a lot. It does seem very… full of personality." She might have said more but it was lost in a fit of giggles.

:lmfao

Loved this chapter, and can't wait to see what happens next :)

Brian and the whole hair thing kept me laughing until the end of the chapter

haha. That is... well, funny as hell seems to describe it. I would have giggled the whole time they were explaining things.

This sound fucking hilarious:D
Can't wait for the next update.

Wow, this is amazing.

once brian's power was mentioned i was like oh thats so kewl

my hair has a mind of its own
BLAHAHAHA XD i died

*subscribes*

Hahah, I think you made their powers perfectly matched to their personalities. I can totally see Brian having charm and a split personality-via-his-hair. Matt's powers make me giggle. I forsee fun times...fun times indeed.

Can't wait for more!

Oh crap, you started a new story! I don't think I can explain the thrill I got when I noticed this. Okay whoa, that sounds...creepy...

Oh well. At least it's not as creepy as this story. Like, wtf? Haha, the first chapter confused as well as amused.

Perhaps too bright and cheery judging by their grimaces and reluctance to remove their sunglasses. Sunshine was the natural enemy of the nocturnal.
I understand that way too well. People always think I'm hung over, but I'm not. The sun is sometimes just too disgusting. It hurts. Seriously.

"What if I do want to see all those 'touristy' things? Are you really going to deprive me of the full experience of your lovely city? For shame, Blitzy, for shame."
Wow...there is just so much shit right there...LOL. How'd you even write it?

"We don't have stores like this in Louisville," Jinx said softly. "There are pretty much only hippy stores and, just walking passed them, you smell like patchouli for a week.
Holy shit I couldn't stop laughing when I read that. Omg. Woman, you should do stand-up. I've only been in Louisville once though...How the heck do you know that?

And they were off in an orgy of clothes and the blood of any other shopper that dared get in their way.
I bow to you. Best description ever. You make everything sexual and violent. It's fantastic.
Right, but I'd better stop making note of every little thing I loved, because that's gonna take me 550 years.

But wtf is with their powers?! How the hell did you figure that shit out??!?!?!?! I'd probably piss my pants if I were there. Oh right, though
Johnny was bending what appeared to be a lead pipe. It wasn’t as showy a spectacle as the rest but it certainly got the point across.
Christ gets shafted. All the time. Everyone else has these super-natural powers, and he's bending a lead pipe? Okay, well, bending a lead-pipe does require abnormal amounts of strength, but geez. Bassists are always under-appreciated. *Huff*

You know how mothers tell you to always wear clean underwear? She probably would have been happy with me wearing any at all.”
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What, trying to keep it easy for the quick fuck in the club bathroom or something?

The men groaned and, suddenly, everything stopped. Random objects clattered to the ground, the fire fizzled out, knives disappeared, and they could breathe passed the fear.
How anti-climatic. It's great lol. I love the conversation after too. The guys complaining? Jimmy making dinner? Really? Hahaha.

Anyway, this story is going to be epic. I love how you started out. Now the picture in the background makes sense. A Bat Signal? LOL. Oh man, that's hilarious. I'm trying to picture the guys as super heroes though...not really working. But hey, are they going to explain that whole "feeling of warmth and happiness" thing? Does Brian have another super power other than having garbage cans at his beck and call?

Alright, I shoudl stop now before the comment gets ridiculous. But I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is going to be amazing!

Hahaaaaa, I loved it.

Super heroes is something that the guys have never been. It makes me giggle, good job Jinx! hahaa.

Tehe...tehehe...bahaha...BAHAHHAA! :lmfao
I'm seriously laughing my ass off at the idea of Avenged as super heroes.

I now can't wait for the mortal/super hero sex. ~~ :tehe:

Really? Lol, i loved it!

Super heroes?

Awesome!!!