So Long, Not Goodnight - Comments

  • fun ghoul fez.

    fun ghoul fez. (100)

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    Unfortunately, life has a way of twisting your plans out of proportion and you have to adjust. That is true, so freaking true. Some of the lines you come up are so... profound because they hit really true to real life. It comes out a little more in your original fiction but still, it's amazing.

    Ah, the Chuck Palahniuk quote. So appropriate for the story. Fight Club ftw.

    So far, I believe I have spotted a Gerard and Frank. I love how you just give little hints about them so that it doesn't have to be them if you don't want it to be. I have also just spotted Mikey the alter boy... why does that sound so sexual to me? :shifty

    While I didn't think this was one of your best works, I think it was still good. I'm not really sure what was... missing, from it, that's usually present in your oneshots buy nevertheless, I still liked it, especially the ambiguity of the characters.
    August 31st, 2009 at 09:04am
  • KaileyAllOver

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    whos POV was it in??Was it Ray's??
    It was good I really liked it Dance
    August 25th, 2009 at 11:00pm