If I Die Young - Comments

Thanks so much BJ :] I'm having a hard time coming up with new events, but I really do like writing it...

Hey, I read you story :) And, I have to say, I have no idea what you're talking about. You? A bad writer? Have you read what you've written? It's really good. I like your style, it's interesting, and informative.

If I was to offer a piece of advice (which I don't think you need, really) is that I noticed that you, like me, have a certain talent of condensing. I have a hard time writing essays, cause I get all the information I need written into three paragraphs, when the essay needs to be three pages. But, for this paticular story, I think it adds to the charm. Another interesting aspect, a different approach.

So, all in all, I think it's perfect. And I hope you continue writing it as long as you enjoy doing so :)

Aww! Thanks! I'll try to update next week, but no promises, because this weekend is 'CHICAGO' and I haven't got a life, then next week I have to make up all the work my teachers with-held to lighten our load! :]

Please please please please update this!
I'm a bit obsessed with stories pertaining to nuclear holocaust and things like that and Chernobyl has been a huge source of fascination to me.
I'm thinking of doing my own story based on it when I can get my other stories tackled.
But anyway I really like this.
I'm subscribing.