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  • T0ast.

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    This story I so intense!
    Can't wait for the sequel.
    by the way I'm totally all for John and Holly! lol
    December 16th, 2009 at 04:59pm
  • blondenlovinit

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    wait did they break up??
    i hope so.
    im for john and cody all the way!!
    haha
    cant wait for the sequel!
    December 13th, 2009 at 05:20am
  • blondenlovinit

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    yay!!
    haha sorry.
    but i've been for john and cody this whole time.
    holly ruined them the first time.
    holly and john, they just dont go together.
    so hopefully i get my wish soon!
    Great chapter.
    cant wait for the next one!!
    November 27th, 2009 at 10:31pm
  • Aliviaaa.

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    wow.
    November 27th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • bria22

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    I am so heartbroken. :( But i love your story. It is one of my fav's!
    November 26th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • bria22

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    NOOOO! I loved John and Holly together!!! I hope they stay together.
    November 26th, 2009 at 07:49am
  • be realistic.

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    Such a good chapter!
    October 4th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    The last bit kinda makes me sad to read.

    Did I make the last bit too depressive? You could have told me!... ; )
    Every time I read that chapter, I ALWAYS laugh. Who knew we could write such an amusing chapter. To us, anyway... : )
    October 4th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • be realistic.

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    Well, I suppose they had fun proving those statistics correct.
    September 30th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • Aliviaaa.

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    Sexual much? lmao, but it was good,cant wait for the next update(:
    September 28th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    cute update,
    i cant wait for more.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 07:40am
  • be realistic.

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    "Okay. I'll be quick, promise." Holly said, walking off to join the line at the counter.

    Garrett snickered and John stared at him, "What? Why are you laughing?" he asked.

    "No reason." Garrett said, shaking his head.

    John let out a frustrated sigh, "You were going to say 'that's what she said' after Holly said that, weren't you?" he guessed.


    I must admit, I expected to hear that myself.
    September 21st, 2009 at 01:23am
  • T0ast.

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    heeey, sorry i haven't commented yet!
    haha, love the story!
    even though it's pretty sad! =(
    but kepp it up! =D
    September 19th, 2009 at 09:54pm
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    great chapter.
    i cant wait for more.
    September 17th, 2009 at 06:38am
  • be realistic.

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    John still loves Cody, I think.

    and you two update super fast.
    September 16th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    yay they made up.
    im happy.
    great update.
    i cant wait for more.
    so update soon.
    September 16th, 2009 at 06:26am
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    damn. i did not see that happening.
    wow john is just having no luck at all.
    i cant wait for more now.
    September 15th, 2009 at 06:20am
  • be realistic.

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    John, John, John.
    tsk, tsk, tsk,

    This story is just a big pot of drama.
    September 15th, 2009 at 01:23am
  • NeverShoutEmma

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    Cody to the rescue!!
    haha.
    i love the update.
    and john is being a dick.
    i cant wait for more.
    good luck with school and college.
    September 14th, 2009 at 09:58pm
  • lexilee

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    Bad, bad John Ohh.
    What a boob, seriously.
    UPDATE SOON!!! <3
    September 13th, 2009 at 08:56pm