Broken Doll - Comments

  • lisamargaret

    lisamargaret (105)

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    This was good. It was a well thought out idea, and it was written fairly well. There were a few spelling errors. It was original. I liked it.

    I cannot not consider it for the contest though, I'm afraid. It was, afterall, pre-written. If the spot for 'wrath' was open, maybe I'd consider it. But I'm sorry, someone has already taken it. 'Sloth' is still available, though, if you wanted to do a whole new story.

    I have other contests, though, if you were interested in contests in general.

    Anyways. I appreciate this. It was a great story. Keep up the good work.
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:47pm