Awww! I love how Johnny tricked himself into believing it was a dream and that he didn't take any notices of the signs telling him otherwise. And the fact that Zacky's made himself so at home is really cute too. I'm glad you've made this full length :) 'Can't wait for more :) xxx
Nice :) Hardly anyone uses this pairing so it's great to see something different and it's nicely written and structured too :) I loved the idea of Zacky going round in the rain and that 'Fuck normal.' at the end was a great little summary of Johnny's feelings. Oh, and I agree with everyone above me: more would be great :D xxx