Lost In Your Eyes - Comments

I love it Manda. Yes, you should fix what they said and thats bout it.
You really should do more one shots!!!
They're amazing like you!!!
*tacklehugs*
BWAHAHAHA You've just been hug raped!!

that was so cute! thank you for your entry [:

hey! erm I don't think your story is suckish. But I have two things to say. First of all the "hour". Shouldn't that be lesson or something (just wondering if you do use it when speaking then never mind just a thought).
And "I still remember a boy with mischievous grins and twinkling light blue eyes that I always thought were pretty, and light blonde hair." Personally it sounds a little bumpy. How 'bout you change it into "I still remember a boy with light blonde hair, mischievous grins and twinkling light blue eyes that I always thought were pretty." :D but otherwise really sweet

(P.S. oh and the obvious mistake that was mentioned before)

omg ur story was soo good

AHHHHHHH!
It is NOT suckish!
NOT ONE BIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (sorry, I felt I needed to do that again)

Make sure you go back to read it and find your mistakes...there's an obvious one, and a not so obvious one(head when it should be heat)
OMG!
You should do more one-shots...seriously

YAY!
~Megan 8o)